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Chapter Thirteen, "Distractions"

Jul 28, 2009 03:07

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Chapter 13, "Distractions"

CHRISTOPHER

"What the heck are you doing?" I shouted, my voice echoing off of the kitchen walls ( Read more... )

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nzanon July 28 2009, 08:31:31 UTC

She shrugged. "Well, look at her. She's not prettier than me anymore, is she?" She flashed me a wicked smile. Which is about when I noticed that one of her eyes was a little greener than the other.

And that's when I decided to stay.

What what Jessica/Christopher flirting what is this? D:

And then It may have been in that very instant, seeing the innards of another creature getting masticated by a very pregnant and very alien Frig, that I began to lose my affection for her.

All this would make me sad, but... PROSTITUTES LOL

Also, I could feel the chemistry between Tabitha/Klaxie from through my computer, it was that strong. When are they going to get together? Hint, hint ;)

nzanon July 28 2009, 09:11:29 UTC

Gosh, you guys are losing your edge. I feel very alone on this page :(

madmadmaddymad July 28 2009, 10:25:55 UTC

I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY RIGHT NOW

nightfalltwen July 28 2009, 10:35:21 UTC

I just want her to have the baby so we can learn its name!

:D

redqueenofevil July 29 2009, 08:43:23 UTC

Lou Haberdash? Or Louberdash? Or ... wait, I mean LouMsWinston. Yup, I think so...

insipidcalamity July 28 2009, 12:52:41 UTC

D8 THAT IS ME RIGHT NOW. MY JAW HAS DROPPED. I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT'S GOING ON.

#1- Frig's alien state...ew.
#2- Pee it out. What. D8 Holy crap that killed me. WHAT.
#3- But I could not take my eyes off of Jessica, who remained stoically outside of the high-fiving. I like this Jessica more and more these days.
#4- Which is about when I noticed that one of her eyes was a little greener than the other.
And that's when I decided to stay. WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.
The hell. CHRISTOPHER/JESSICA?! I don't know...this could be badass.
#5- This whole chapter D8

insipidcalamity July 28 2009, 12:53:54 UTC

Oh and TEAM CHRISTOPHER

a_respite July 28 2009, 12:57:52 UTC

Definitely TEAM CHRISTOPHER.

But I think I'm starting to ship Christopher/no one. None of these characters are quite bad-ass enough for her. With the possible exception of Lexington.

insipidcalamity July 28 2009, 17:24:36 UTC

I completely agree. I'd almost rather Christopher be alone and just fight aliens like the badass awesomeness that she is. I like Jessica, but I don't think she could handle Christopher. And Lexington's too busy drooling over Hector 2.0. CHRISTOPHER IS DONE PLAYING SECOND STRING.

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