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Chapter Sixteen, "Lessons"

Aug 03, 2009 23:29

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Chapter 16, "Lessons"

CHRISTOPHERThis town has seriously misjudged the alien threat in our midst. Everyone's just accepted these creepy, slime-covered dorks as friendly, benign, safe, even. The whole display at the wedding, the entire audience practically crying out for alien rights, ( Read more... )

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nailohi13 August 4 2009, 05:02:53 UTC

First comment? Seriously? Well damn. I'll just make myself have something to say for that honor.

...Christopher/Jessica seems very much in the works. Perhaps a Jessica chapter next, then? That would be interesting. So far everyone who's has a moment in the spotlight has actually, you know, cared significantly about Frig. Seeing it from Jessica's POV could be rather interesting, since she doesn't give jack.

Or does she, now? *shipper eyes @Christopher*

nzanon August 4 2009, 06:40:10 UTC

I'm confused... here Jessica has grey eyes, and before she had green? Do they magically change colours? Maybe... SHE'S AN ALIEN, TOO!

xlormp August 4 2009, 06:47:03 UTC

Did I? O snap! They change color depending on what she's wearing. YES.

nailohi13 August 4 2009, 08:06:26 UTC

Actually, my eyes do that too, so IT'S TOTALLY POSSBIBLE. NATCH.

nailohi13 August 4 2009, 08:06:42 UTC

...Lol, poss-bible.

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anonymous August 4 2009, 09:47:36 UTC

woah cool. i wonder where u buy giraffe spleen....

anonymous August 4 2009, 11:44:41 UTC

That.....is a very good question.

--somerdaye

a_respite August 4 2009, 12:21:59 UTC

Actually, I think there's a place on Bergenline Ave. in West New York that carries Giraffe Spleen. But that's a long way from Spatulas.

anonymous August 5 2009, 02:51:45 UTC

Not by spaceship!

-Rachel

piratesmiley August 4 2009, 12:09:12 UTC

About the entire crew of robots my father had created to fight them, most of which remained dormant in the basement except for Wednesdays when dad and Lou activated them all for the robot dance.

EXCELLENCE. I want to take part in the robot dance!

a_respite August 4 2009, 12:19:40 UTC

Is there a cover charge to get to see the Wednesday Night Robot Dance? I'd pay good money to see that. Do they dance to Herbie Hancock's "Rockit"? 'Cause that's the song I have in my head while I'm thinking of the Robot Dance.

Which is probably all I'm going to be thinking of all day.

And OMG!JESSICAANDCHRISTOPHER? RLY? Jessica's being all nice and stuff. I'm guessing ulterior motives at work - but not of the good kind this time.

The question is, of course, will they take Jessica's car, or will they take Christopher's Badass Spaceship Of Love?

(TEAM CHRISTOPHER!!!)