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Chapter Twenty-Six, "In Which I Use a Lot of Parenthetical Statements (Just You Watch and See)"

Aug 27, 2009 18:45

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raienna August 28 2009, 00:10:18 UTC

Oh, wow, Jox is quite the... well, CHARMER doesn't quite fit. Hmm...

I keep eagerly awaiting each chapter to see what the freaky mutant baby will do next!

raienna August 28 2009, 00:10:58 UTC

Also - holy freak-spawn of human and alien DNA! I'm first!

*does a small happy dance*

summer_breeze01 August 28 2009, 00:13:01 UTC

Dang, I was about to post that, but I guess you beat me! XD

summer_breeze01 August 28 2009, 00:12:12 UTC

DUN DUN DUUUNNNNNNNNN!!!
Oh, man. Wem is a jerk, Jox is a bitch, people are treating Frig like she's totally not awesome, and Christopher is nowhere to be seen (what a smart, badass alien hunter she is!). What an awesome chapter (except for the fact that there was no Christopher)! See, I can do parenthetical statements (or exclamations!) too!

Team Christopher! And I'm starting to agree that something must be done about Wemjox. Wemjox is Renesmee and the Volturi rolled into one, and it's going to be awesome! (Just, please let there be an epic showdown at the end of this book!)

anonymous August 28 2009, 00:28:03 UTC

Geez, so many emotions in this chapter :) Poor Frig. She just needs some attention, thats all! She had to go through all of the trouble of having the dang thing, they should give her some credit!

Btw, is her full name really Friggin' Effing Gorgeous? Her parents had good choice with names.

-cg613

celinra August 28 2009, 01:01:14 UTC

The freaky mutant baby having to die is way more interesting than this other book I read where they had to gather a whole ton of people to anticlimactically keep a freaky mutant baby alive. Seriously.

celinra August 28 2009, 01:06:31 UTC

Oh, and also it's more interesting that the main character in this one is now not getting as much attention as she was before, whereas in that same aforementioned book, the main character ended up becoming even more perfect-and-loved than she was before. It really does make it a lot more interesting and relatable and such. Or as relatable as is possible for a story involving aliens and robots and awesome alien huntresses and freaky mutant hybrid babies.

tallybonker August 28 2009, 01:16:43 UTC

I used to think Frig was a bitch, but her kid is much worse!