LJ Idol Season 10: The Distance Between Us [Intersection]

[xlovebecomesher]

She would rather be anywhere but here right now. She truly meant anywhere. Hell, she'd rather be having her wisdom teeth extracted again if that meant Adam was by her side

Comments

[awakenyourfaith]

Wonderfully done!

[xlovebecomesher]

Thank you! Please check out my partner's work as well :)

[eternal_ot]

This was a nice POV and I am left rooting for Adam and Eve. A nice take on the prompt. The feelings and emotions are perfect. Heading to check penpusher's entry now :)

[xlovebecomesher]

Thank you :)

[rayaso]

This made a great companion piece for penpusher's entry! It made the real estate agent sound sleazier. It perfectly illustrates the problem of when your dreams don't match the circumstances of your life. It would be such a difficult decision to make. Very well written!

[xlovebecomesher]

Thank you :D I found Higgins quite sleazy and I figured Eve would too!

[beeker121]

I'm glad Eve picked up on the creepy that guy is all catch phrases and smarm (I read your piece second, I love how much of it echoed from the other). I liked this story about how things that should be exciting just aren't always.

[xlovebecomesher]

I'm glad you liked!

[penpusher]

I didn't mention it but, it was great of you to go back to the season 9 intersection that we did and revive the characters from that go for this one! Gives it a real through-thread! Thanks for having me as your partner again and thanks for a really wonderful job on this piece!

[xlovebecomesher]

It seemed only appropriate!

Aww thank you :) Anytime - you're an awesome partner!