NEWS - Shige/Tegoshi - Six ways of finding out (one-shot)

[xmare_imbrium]

Title: Six ways of finding out
Pairing: Shige/Tegoshi, Pin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: romance, fluff
Author's notes: It was supposed to be really short. I FAILED. I swear, it's all Tegoshi's fault, the boy just doesn't know when to shut up, his part is the longest one... and also, the most boring one. *glares at Tegoshi*

Six ways of finding out

Tegoshi

You know

Comments

[ayau3]

OMGGGGG!! You wrote everyone's parts so nicely. :DDD
I can't believe this is your first fic.
If only I could write as well as you. :333

[ayau3]

Oops. I meant first NEWS fic. xD

[xmare_imbrium]

Ah, I don't feel confident about my writing so I'm happy everytime someone tells me something like that! ^___^ Thanks so much!

[jana_nox]

OMG!
It was so fun, thank you!!
May I translate it into Russian? Please-please-please! I'll link back and say thank you properly, I promise.

Anyway it's a great thing to read. :))

[xmare_imbrium]

Wow, of course you can! That'll make me so happy! ^____^ I don't know if it's worth it, but please do and thank you!

[j_halo7]

i love this fic! love the style of writing. something different from the usual fics. love how it's like a circle. ends where it started.

Massu's part is tooo funny! his love for food is equalivant to a miracle! XD

[xmare_imbrium]

Ah, I'm glad you noticed <3 thank you, thank you!^_^

[jadedfrenzy]

I am so amused right now. Seriously. Me = Amused.

It is a very well-rounded story and I'm especially impressed with the fact that you were able to keep the pace of the story without any obvious dialogue exchange. Tegoshi was adorable.

The only little bit of criticism that I can offer (helpful hint? opinionated suggestion?) would be regarding Tegoshi's dog. When you have a pet that you love, I don't think you'd ever refer to it as an 'it.' I think it would always be 'he' or 'she'

:) BUT I LOVED IT SO MUCH MY HUSBAND HAD TO ASK ME WHY THE HELL I WAS SMILING SO WIDELY.

Spaz ended.

Thank you. Oh, and if I had any NEWS members lying around, you think I would throw them at you? Hell no. I don't care how good your story is, that would be like asking Massu to throw food. Just ain't gonna happen.

[xmare_imbrium]

I love your av lol xD

Ah, I was actually thinking about that while writing but I don't know if it's a he or a she xDDDD Well, but maybe I'll make it a he? ^^;;;

I'm glad it made you smile! Thank you so much!!! ^___^

[xmare_imbrium]

and you're RIGHT about NewS members, damn it *hides in a corner and cries*

[eddictedd]

*throws cookies and flowers*.. *and a choice or ur fav NewS member*

i totally enjoyed your fic.. Lol..

[xmare_imbrium]

yay! Ah, fav one? That would be all of them! XDDD thank you! ^____^