Comments | xmare_imbrium: Close

xmare_imbrium

Close - 2/2

Apr 19, 2009 13:42

Title: Close (2/2)
Pairing: HaeTeukHae
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It's Donghae's simple logic; if they had sex, then they are a couple and they must have sex again.

The first part is here.

Part Two

He thinks for two guys who've been friends for a long time something like sleeping with each other once can't mean all that much. It happened, it felt ( Read more... )

haeteuk, fanfiction

Comments 40

leunah23 April 19 2009, 14:34:44 UTC

this is a very rare pairing BUT ITS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!
i enjoyed reading it...
you made Hae...so perfect here...
cute and perfect

xmare_imbrium April 19 2009, 15:21:25 UTC

Haha I guess I made him perfect because I really think he's perfect. <3

Glad you liked it! Thank you! ^^

cherjeanne April 19 2009, 14:49:55 UTC

I love this...
ang YES, PLease write KangTeuk side story..
I really curious

xmare_imbrium April 19 2009, 15:21:54 UTC

I will write it! ^^ Thank you! <3

retrominho April 19 2009, 17:50:13 UTC

uhm. dude. that smut was absolutly MORE THAN FINE. thanks very much.

i laughed so hard at that porno joke because LOL - i thought i may be the only one who was forced to watch something that disgusting... 8D but 'mine' was slightly different... well i'll stop right now XD

and kangteuk sidestory? - yes please.

mhh... about who should be on top... :/ i like how you did it. *shrugs* :D

ah, this was just what i needed after that save engergy/earth thingy. mhwaaah. |3
(and i also would love to see more HaeTeuk... i actually would even write it but i'm so freakin unsure of my english 8D i'll just sit and hope to read more TT")

xmare_imbrium April 19 2009, 18:18:21 UTC

Well it's my first time writing a sex scene so I'm worried. I'm glad you liked it. XD

My friend loves to show me her brother's porn >D She likes to make fun of how they always go "ooo yeah" like they can't make any other sounds haha. But this horse thing was surprising for both of us. >D

You know, I got the idea to write it after what they were doing on MB and hmm... another MB? I don't remember. But now there's this save energy thing. Lol. Seriously. Save your energy for sex.

You aren't English? I wouldn't notice. XD I'm unsure of my english too, I can't get the past tenses at all and sometimes I make really silly mistakes. >D So, you know, if there won't be any Haeteuk soon, you have to write one XDDD

Thanks for the comment! <3

retrominho April 20 2009, 15:42:54 UTC

it was fine really :)

omg what... 8D i mean, yes for porn because of the lulz but... :/ animal things are just BLERGH wth >D

omg i was EXACTLY thinking the same! XD such a shame the heech wasn't there. he would have spiced things up :/

oh. thank you |D'' i actually come from germany... (but i'm actually portguese... yeah. weird i know, but that's how it is here in germany xD)

:/ i promise nothing but i'll consider it... your fault if it's fail mkay? 8D

ex_keopi April 19 2009, 19:46:17 UTC

I LOVED IT!
That's all i can say. ♥ TeukHae or HaeTeuk is such a wonderful otp. ♥ I'm not used to write in english, so i can't write TeukHae. ): But i have a lot of TeukHae in spanish. lol

yesunglover April 19 2009, 22:49:42 UTC

really? than maybe you can get someone to translate it. Just a thought but I want to read them too.

ex_keopi April 19 2009, 22:56:00 UTC

OH! I will translate them :D (I'm studying english) but i will wait a few months for that. I want to improve my english skills firts. Then i will translate them & ask someone to be my beta. :)

xmare_imbrium April 22 2009, 19:38:37 UTC

Oh! Thank you! ^^
And yes, please translate your fics! xD world needs more of this pairing!

yesunglover April 19 2009, 22:48:37 UTC

I imagined it must be hard for you writing those smut scenes. I don't think I'll be able to write them myself. Did you blush writing this? haha

But I really love this. I love how affectionate and open Donghae is about his feelings for Teukie.
Heechul cracks me up and yes I would like to read the side story please.

Well personally I don't think it matters though, I mean, they're both guys right, they can't be bottom all the time... at some point they could be the top.

xmare_imbrium April 22 2009, 19:57:01 UTC

Oh... well, I didn't blush while writing, just when I took a break from writing to think what to write next! When I write... I just write. xDDD I guess it makes things a bit easier. xD

Yes, I think that too, about the top and bottom thing. But still, for some couples like Kangteuk, everyone thinks one person should be always on top. >D And some people have their preferences, that's why I ask. :D

Thanks so much for the comment! <3