Man is Evil, Man is Good (6/?)

Mar 05, 2012 07:52

Title: Man is Evil, Man is Good (6/?)
Author: Christmas Pterodactyl
Rating: R/Mature for large amounts violence and implied sexual situations.
Word count: Part 6: 7,142 words
Disclaimer: The author makes no claims of ownership to any material that may be recognized by the public.
Spoilers: Up to and including 3x05: Horror Fiction in Seven Spooky ( Read more... )

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fangirl_101 March 5 2012, 18:26:29 UTC
Ah! Rich is involved! One of my guesses was right! Was surprised by Slater, but that's a really great twist that she's a descendant of Marga and she's possessed her body. Also it explains why Slater just vanished from episodes after S1. As always, this is badass and awesome!

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xmaspterodactyl March 6 2012, 09:22:17 UTC
I loved using Slater, and I'm glad it was a surprise. I tried to leave small hints using initials and personality traits. I just love the thought of her jealousy of Britta and transfer it over to Marga. I can just see Michelle's actress on a classic chaise lounge, enjoying the power games she could revel in.

Rich was a natural villain. He proved it in the first episode he was in. We'll see more of him soon enough in a different light.

I'm glad you like it and I'm glad you're surprised. Thanks for reading.

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nyclove3 March 5 2012, 19:28:30 UTC
xmaspterodactyl March 6 2012, 09:24:10 UTC
I tried to think of a way to bring back Slater and make her jealous and evil. It wasn't much of a leap. It's really easy to see her just lounging back and watching atrocities while sipping on wine.

Glad you were surprised, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I appreciate your reading it.

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crittab March 5 2012, 20:32:09 UTC
Seriously? AU fics just don't get better than this. Between this fic and the Mafia one, I think JA has some of the best writers around.

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xmaspterodactyl March 6 2012, 09:26:48 UTC
I just thought it was different, seeing Annie as the vampire and Jeff as the "innocent." It throws him out of his comfort zone and we see an assertive Annie who is much wiser than she lets on.

I appreciate your reading, and am glad you're enjoying it.

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