Fill: Downtown (Charles/Erik, Pretty Woman AU) 1a/?
anonymous
October 24 2011, 21:22:49 UTC
Writing this is making me realise that I know this film waaaaaaaaay too well.
Downtown (everything’s waiting for you)Tight jeans and eyeliner, bright lights and dirty streets. Downtown LA, with its rumbling traffic and crowded sidewalks. It’s a place you go to forget your cares. A place where everybody’s got a dream
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Fill: Downtown (Charles/Erik, Pretty Woman AU) 1b/?
anonymous
October 24 2011, 21:25:12 UTC
Though Erik would never to admit this, even to Azazel, he was far from comfortable with the situation. He’d charmed his way into the hotel room, but now things weren’t going according to plan. He took another cautious look at the silver tray. British politeness was all very well, but this was taking it a step too far. ‘Strawberries and champagne
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Re: Fill: Downtown (Charles/Erik, Pretty Woman AU) 1c/?
anonymous
October 24 2011, 21:33:32 UTC
Charles couldn’t quite believe that his inherent politeness had led him to being blown by a prostitute. It wasn’t sensible. But the poor man had kept giving him uncomfortable little glances, and he felt he was making some kind of social faux pas, implying that Erik wasn’t good enough. He had finally cracked.
Still, it wasn’t nearly as sleazy as he’d feared. After getting through a Hitchcock thriller, a whole heap of strawberries, two chess games and a bottle and a half of champagne he’d decided that Erik was much nicer than most of the people in his social circle. Besides, he obviously knew what he was doing, which was more than could be said for the last few incredibly dull men with whom he’d exchanged stilted dinner conversation and unsatisfying blowjobs.
This blowjob certainly fell into the satisfying category. In fact, it lifted the lid off the satisfying category and exploded up into the stratosphere. It was fierce and drawn out and so… bloody… good… Jesus… ChristErik raised his head and licked the come off his lips. It was an
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Fill: Downtown (Charles/Erik, Pretty Woman AU) 1d/?
anonymous
October 24 2011, 21:37:28 UTC
Out of the sixteen papers Charles had been through, four should never have got through peer review and another three had thrown up mildly interesting but useless facts. The remaining nine, however, told quite a coherent story if you looked at the combined results in a certain way, which apparently nobody had. He felt himself smile. ‘You know, Erik, I might just be able to pull some of this data into a worthwhile conclusion.’
‘Really? How interesting.’
That drawl again. Oh, god, he was planning a review article with a hustler in his hotel room.
No, with Erik in his hotel room. Erik was nice. Erik was
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Omg, I am literally grinning from ear to ear. This fill is so amazing! I love that you're tailoring the premise of the movie to the characters instead of allowing it to dictate them. Oooh, such vulnerabilityyy~ So much love for this <333 I'm going to be F5'ing like crazy. Thank you thank you thank you for filling this :D
Thank you! :DDD I'm so glad you liked the first part, OP. I hoped the characters would ring true - I tried it with Vivian!Charles but it came out a bit disastrous. Very glad of the vice versa option!
Re: Fill: Downtown (Charles/Erik, Pretty Woman AU) 1d/?
anonymous
October 25 2011, 08:35:55 UTC
he felt he was making some kind of social faux pas
Damn, I get that feeling all the time, Charles. I feel your pain. Here you are, being all polite and respectable and shit, and it all blows up in your face.
Re: Fill: Downtown (Charles/Erik, Pretty Woman AU) 1d/?
anonymous
October 25 2011, 08:38:43 UTC
Afterwards, he slipped away from the warm, sleeping body, deciding to give himself another illicit little treat. He went over to his briefcase, pulled out the latest issue of Cell Biology, and settled down happily to read.
Please someone write thisss.
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Downtown (everything’s waiting for you)Tight jeans and eyeliner, bright lights and dirty streets. Downtown LA, with its rumbling traffic and crowded sidewalks. It’s a place you go to forget your cares. A place where everybody’s got a dream ( ... )
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Still, it wasn’t nearly as sleazy as he’d feared. After getting through a Hitchcock thriller, a whole heap of strawberries, two chess games and a bottle and a half of champagne he’d decided that Erik was much nicer than most of the people in his social circle. Besides, he obviously knew what he was doing, which was more than could be said for the last few incredibly dull men with whom he’d exchanged stilted dinner conversation and unsatisfying blowjobs.
This blowjob certainly fell into the satisfying category. In fact, it lifted the lid off the satisfying category and exploded up into the stratosphere. It was fierce and drawn out and so… bloody… good… Jesus… ChristErik raised his head and licked the come off his lips. It was an ( ... )
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‘Really? How interesting.’
That drawl again. Oh, god, he was planning a review article with a hustler in his hotel room.
No, with Erik in his hotel room. Erik was nice. Erik was ( ... )
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Damn, I get that feeling all the time, Charles. I feel your pain. Here you are, being all polite and respectable and shit, and it all blows up in your face.
AWESOME STORY!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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PERFECTION.
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THANK YOU!
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