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Round 5

Nov 02, 2011 15:31

Welcome to Round 5 of X-Men First Kink.

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Charles/Erik anonymous groping on the underground, dub-con synekdokee November 12 2011, 16:56:01 UTC

Some dub-connish frottage porn where stranger!Erik molests Charles in a crowded underground carriage. Because really I just want to read about Erik rubbing his massive cock against Charles's pert arse where anyone could see =) And maybe stroking those nimble fingers of his over Charles's clothed prick with Charles's bag shielding them. And all the while trying to keep up a normal appearance, like muttering trite apologies every time the train jolts and makes them stumble, like they're not on the verge of a mindblowing orgasm right then and there.

(Dub-con because at no point does anyone actually ask what Charles wants, but after the initial shock he's totally on board.)

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 04:06:00 UTC

Yay for creative inferiority complexes! :D Wait until you see me draw. I stress even more.

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) sharpestscalpel January 4 2012, 04:08:44 UTC

I say I can't draw for shit - it's really that I have no patience. *laugh* I think it's easy for people to forget that what seems easy - and not good - to them is totally impressive to people who can't do it at all.

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 04:00:01 UTC

Oh My God! HNGG!! I can't even express to you how so, so good this was for me, synecdoche.

Hm...5/5. Is this really the end to this story? If it is, I shall be disappointed, but I thank you very much for writing it. This was gloriously hot :D

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 04:03:33 UTC

Yeah I don't really know how to continue this without having it be disappointing :> I left a hint ambiguity in the ending so everyone can decide for themselves. If someone wants to take this and write a sequel, I won't mind.

Happy to hear you enjoyed it, I'm always a bit nervous about posting stuff I've written!

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 04:59:11 UTC

So. Fucking. Hot.

Whew! Thanks so much for that! Much more exciting than my morning commute...

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 05:03:15 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it 8)

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Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 08:22:12 UTC

THIS IS WHY YOU ASK FOR THE NUMBER OF THE PRETTY BRUNET BEFORE YOU START RUTTING YOUR COCK AGAINST HIS ASS IN A PUBLIC PLACE.

Courting - You're not doing it right.

*cracks up*

Well put, my friend, well put.

Glad you liked it :D

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 4 2012, 17:13:22 UTC

Hot! (In my head, it was Erik who entered the rest room. He locked the door and then pushed Charles down on his knees. :D)

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) jack_regan January 4 2012, 17:52:19 UTC

We must be sharing a brain ;)

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 5 2012, 00:43:04 UTC

I was thinking more along the lines of bending him over the sink and making him watch himself in the mirror while Erik fucks him, but whatever pleases you most 8)

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 5 2012, 00:50:06 UTC

Oh Sweet Lord! Are you absolutely sure you don't want to write a continuation to this??? No pressure, but, man, I think it would be fabulous :)

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 5 2012, 01:01:50 UTC

Hah, the more I think about it, the more certain I become that any sequel I'd write would probably end up being void of sex :/ I was thinking of what happens when they meet again in a train that's crowded enough for them to not really be comfortable talking to each other, and yet not so crowded as to give them an excuse to stand glued against one another. So most probably they'd just stand/sit in silence staring at each other awkwardly and just before Charles got off, Erik would just... ask to take him home? IDK. In any case it would probably end up being highly unsatisfactory XD

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 5 2012, 01:20:29 UTC

Alright :) Well, I had to try! I just wanted to thank you again for filling this as well as the OP for posting this prompt. What I had in mind was a continuation from the moment that someone (Erik) walks into the restroom as Charles is walking out, but that's just my interpretation. As another anon above suggested, we probably create our best work only when the inspiration strikes.

Re: Fill: What Position Should I Wear? 5/5 (Public groping, light dub-con) synekdokee January 5 2012, 01:45:25 UTC

In my imagination Charles would raise his gaze to the mirror only to see Erik standing behind him with a stony expression.

:D

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