FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 1/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:51:48 UTC
Further warnings: disparaging comments against the porn movie industry, run-on sentences, britishisms and probably americanisms and just-plain-weird-isms as well because I live in England but I'm ESL and my language wires aren't always all straight, especially at four in the morning.
Also, OP, you owe me a new pair of knickers. Mine seem to have spontaneously combusted.
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"Wanna watch something?"
Erik drags his eyes from Charles' jeans and the way his sprawling about made them ride low enough to show a hint of boxers. Calvin Klein, light blue. Ridiculous. At least they're not purple.
Charles is watching him with unfocused, heavy-lidded eyes, and Erik focuses on drinking the last of his beer and throwing the bottle among the ten or so corpses already on the floor before he remembers to answer the question.
"Not one of your movies, right now, I don't think."
Charles turns to face him and glares at him half-heartedly.
"Come on, don't leave it at that. I can't wait to hear how you're gonna insult me next
( ... )
FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 2/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:52:50 UTC
"How about Full Metal Jacket?" Charles asks when he sits down. "Mindscrew and guns. Compromises."
Erik leans against Charles, because he's tired, and drunk, and there's no good reason not to. He takes a look at the screen.
"You're getting it from iTunes?" he laughs. "Fuck, I forget there's people who actually get this stuff legally."
Charles shakes his head and bites his lower lip, visibly trying not to smile too much. "Isn't it you who's always complaining about getting ambushed with porn torrents when all you want is stuff with explosions?"
"Yeah. I guess when you download porn, you know exactly what you're doing
( ... )
FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 3/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:53:59 UTC
It's good fun at first, of course it is. The acting is perfectly wooden, the set is ridiculous, the lines so cheesy they're not entirely sure if it's on purpose or not. A sound broom slips inside the shot once or twice.
The laugh and laugh, and make stupid comments, try to be as crass as they can manage.
It's good fun until about midway through the first good bit, when Erik realises belatedly why that particular film stuck in his memory in the first place.
The actress is gorgeous, first of. She's got breasts that should be illegal, and maybe she's not the best at putting her soul into lines like "you should step inside and chat, I'm feeling lonely", but for the parts that count, yeah, she can act.
The guy is hot, too, not the usual faceless, pasty white, hairy blob with a dick that sexually frustrated middle-aged men can use as a self-insert. He's lean, and toned, and he's got a great arse. Erik can't help appreciating it. He knows there's nothing wrong with liking it both ways, he's not ashamed of it, thank you. He just - he
( ... )
FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 4/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:55:10 UTC
He could laugh. He could sob. It's so very tempting to slip a hand between his legs, to press against his cockhead just a bit, not too hard, to take the edge off; where's the harm?
Right, where's the harm in rubbing one out with Charles not a foot away? Does he want Charles to kick him out and be awkward as fuck every time they're alone together after? No, he can do this. He can. He'll just wait it out, wait until the film is over - he's got no idea how long it will take, probably too long, probably he'll just come in his fucking pants first, but he can't exactly go "I'm bored, let's watch Kubrick now", especially when it was his brilliant idea to watch a porno in the first place. He can't draw attention to himself now; Charles would see exactly why he wants to stop.
So he'll wait until it's over, say goodnight to Charles, ride the bus home and then he'll have the best wank of his life. He's just going to have to ignore being more aroused than at nearly any other time in his life for another - he glances at his watch - forty-five
( ... )
FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 5/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:56:23 UTC
He stares blankly at the screen. The husband has come home and joined in, also gorgeous, this one with a long, thick cock. They could be raising sheep for all he cares now, though, the small figures on a computer screen. They started this mess, but they're nothing compared to being in this bed right now, rock hard, Charles next to him in the same state, and the agony of his hand on his cock, trying and trying to get himself off, but never quite enough.
That's when he catches a rhythmic, unmistakeable movement out of the corner of his eye.
Charles is rubbing himself too.
The wave of heat going through him at that thought is so intense that for a moment, he thinks he could come. He wishes he could come; the rational desire to end this, get it over with almost as strong as the pure animal need for the finish, the ecstasy of it
( ... )
FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 03:58:29 UTC
His neck is arching away from Charles, and he can feel sweat running down his back. He's almost there, almost, maybe half a dozen strokes, he feels stuck on the brink and he can barely breathe-
"Fuck!" Charles' voice, broken and almost unrecognisable, and he can see Charles pushing his jeans down to his ankles, spreading his thighs; his left hand is back, fingers glistening with spit as they disappear low between his legs.
"Charles," Erik breathes out, watching him push his fingers inside himself; and then, louder, in a high, whimpering tone, "Charles!" as he comes, harder than he ever has, vision whiting out as he is swept away by a wave of pleasure so intense it feels almost like pain as it crashes over him, and crashes, and crashes, and it feels like it will never end
( ... )
Re: FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 05:47:10 UTC
omfg this is fantastic. the really-really-wanting-to and the no-it's-a-terrible-idea, ahhh! delicious tension and i love that you ended it with an unresolved but definitely promising note.
Re: FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 05:59:29 UTC
*fans self* Okay...DAMN.
I LOVED Erik's internal struggle and how it turns out he's so caught up in his own teen angst re: his feelings about Charles that's he's completely missed that Charles is into him, too.
Re: OP here
anonymous
February 29 2012, 18:36:00 UTC
Author!Anon here
Thank you! I'm sososo glad you liked it :D (Full disclosure: this was my first time writing full-on smut, not just UST. I was nervous.)
... NGL, I'm kind of dying to write the next friday. I've gotten surprisingly attached to the 'emotionally dense teenagers who wank a lot' version of Charles and Erik when I was writing this, and I want to explore them a bit more. Would you mind if I use your prompt as a springboard and keep posting here even though it's not technically a fill anymore? I just don't wanna deanon haha /slinks away in shame
Re: FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: slight underage, intoxication/dubcon) 6/6
anonymous
February 29 2012, 18:42:45 UTC
Um, HOLY HELL. Now I need a sequel where Charles and Erik grudgingly admit that they're both virgins and go about deflowering each other to every conceivable sexual position over the course of a weekend, with nothing but junk food, beer, and a well-thumbed copy of the Kama Sutra to sustain them.
FILL: Chain Reaction (Charles/Erik, warnings: underage, allusions to emotional neglect) 2a/?
anonymous
March 1 2012, 01:52:25 UTC
help, I can't stop writing this. IDEK where the hell it's all coming from. But I do have an idea where I'm going with this, so there's that.
Charles' mommy issues are showing in this chapter, fair warning. Also, nongraphic mention of a 14 y.o. exploring his body.
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Charles opens his eyes at 6:42, like he does every morning, give or take a few minutes.
He doesn't need to wake up before seven thirty - actually, he doesn't need to wake up at any hour at all, since it's the middle of July. But tell that to his biological clock.
He doesn't mind. He's a morning person anyway. He's probably got his father to thank for that, since his mother isn't anything approaching viable before one PM. And there are upsides to waking up early
( ... )
Also, OP, you owe me a new pair of knickers. Mine seem to have spontaneously combusted.
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"Wanna watch something?"
Erik drags his eyes from Charles' jeans and the way his sprawling about made them ride low enough to show a hint of boxers. Calvin Klein, light blue. Ridiculous. At least they're not purple.
Charles is watching him with unfocused, heavy-lidded eyes, and Erik focuses on drinking the last of his beer and throwing the bottle among the ten or so corpses already on the floor before he remembers to answer the question.
"Not one of your movies, right now, I don't think."
Charles turns to face him and glares at him half-heartedly.
"Come on, don't leave it at that. I can't wait to hear how you're gonna insult me next ( ... )
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Erik leans against Charles, because he's tired, and drunk, and there's no good reason not to. He takes a look at the screen.
"You're getting it from iTunes?" he laughs. "Fuck, I forget there's people who actually get this stuff legally."
Charles shakes his head and bites his lower lip, visibly trying not to smile too much. "Isn't it you who's always complaining about getting ambushed with porn torrents when all you want is stuff with explosions?"
"Yeah. I guess when you download porn, you know exactly what you're doing ( ... )
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The laugh and laugh, and make stupid comments, try to be as crass as they can manage.
It's good fun until about midway through the first good bit, when Erik realises belatedly why that particular film stuck in his memory in the first place.
The actress is gorgeous, first of. She's got breasts that should be illegal, and maybe she's not the best at putting her soul into lines like "you should step inside and chat, I'm feeling lonely", but for the parts that count, yeah, she can act.
The guy is hot, too, not the usual faceless, pasty white, hairy blob with a dick that sexually frustrated middle-aged men can use as a self-insert. He's lean, and toned, and he's got a great arse. Erik can't help appreciating it. He knows there's nothing wrong with liking it both ways, he's not ashamed of it, thank you. He just - he ( ... )
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Right, where's the harm in rubbing one out with Charles not a foot away? Does he want Charles to kick him out and be awkward as fuck every time they're alone together after? No, he can do this. He can. He'll just wait it out, wait until the film is over - he's got no idea how long it will take, probably too long, probably he'll just come in his fucking pants first, but he can't exactly go "I'm bored, let's watch Kubrick now", especially when it was his brilliant idea to watch a porno in the first place. He can't draw attention to himself now; Charles would see exactly why he wants to stop.
So he'll wait until it's over, say goodnight to Charles, ride the bus home and then he'll have the best wank of his life. He's just going to have to ignore being more aroused than at nearly any other time in his life for another - he glances at his watch - forty-five ( ... )
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That's when he catches a rhythmic, unmistakeable movement out of the corner of his eye.
Charles is rubbing himself too.
The wave of heat going through him at that thought is so intense that for a moment, he thinks he could come. He wishes he could come; the rational desire to end this, get it over with almost as strong as the pure animal need for the finish, the ecstasy of it ( ... )
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"Fuck!" Charles' voice, broken and almost unrecognisable, and he can see Charles pushing his jeans down to his ankles, spreading his thighs; his left hand is back, fingers glistening with spit as they disappear low between his legs.
"Charles," Erik breathes out, watching him push his fingers inside himself; and then, louder, in a high, whimpering tone, "Charles!" as he comes, harder than he ever has, vision whiting out as he is swept away by a wave of pleasure so intense it feels almost like pain as it crashes over him, and crashes, and crashes, and it feels like it will never end ( ... )
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I LOVED Erik's internal struggle and how it turns out he's so caught up in his own teen angst re: his feelings about Charles that's he's completely missed that Charles is into him, too.
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And you worked in two of the bonuses! I couldn't have asked for a more perfect fill... this was SCORCHING.
God, now I want to see what happens next Friday...
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Thank you! I'm sososo glad you liked it :D (Full disclosure: this was my first time writing full-on smut, not just UST. I was nervous.)
... NGL, I'm kind of dying to write the next friday. I've gotten surprisingly attached to the 'emotionally dense teenagers who wank a lot' version of Charles and Erik when I was writing this, and I want to explore them a bit more. Would you mind if I use your prompt as a springboard and keep posting here even though it's not technically a fill anymore? I just don't wanna deanon haha /slinks away in shame
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... Oh.
I'm doing a sequel (probs a bit less PWP and more character-based, but still smutty) and I'll keep this in mind. Defo. Yeah.
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Charles' mommy issues are showing in this chapter, fair warning. Also, nongraphic mention of a 14 y.o. exploring his body.
--
Charles opens his eyes at 6:42, like he does every morning, give or take a few minutes.
He doesn't need to wake up before seven thirty - actually, he doesn't need to wake up at any hour at all, since it's the middle of July. But tell that to his biological clock.
He doesn't mind. He's a morning person anyway. He's probably got his father to thank for that, since his mother isn't anything approaching viable before one PM. And there are upsides to waking up early ( ... )
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