"The Reds"

Sep 20, 2008 12:18

Title: Since You Been Gone (II out of II)
Chapter: 1.14 
Author: Read more... )

xabi alonso, fernando torres, daniel agger, steven gerrard

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xmrbrightside89 September 20 2008, 10:53:48 UTC
What can I say about this chapter? HAHA
Just that I wrote this while I was sick .___. yeah, laptop on my bed... and my head which was ALMOST EXPLODING...
Hope you like this even if I think it's a HUGE whole CRAP! .__.

Talking about the characters... well, Daniel will be one of the new ones... hehe hope you're glad of that!

Well... the title of this chapter... says it all I think...
In this chapter we see the different characters' reactions. Some seem feeling not that bad (Stewie... seems feeling good,is that true?) others... are just doing bad, taking pills and stuff (Daniel)... and so on...

I don't even know what to say about this... except that I'm so sorry for Dan ...and that LJ is a fucking shit... It kept saying me that the post was too large... ç___ç
so I had to split this in two...argh I HATE THAT!

BTW, I'll wait your lovely comments about this...
suggestions/critics/appreciations/quotes (that's just the apotheosis of HAPPINESS for me) are always so loved <3

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YAY! jennybunny_08 September 20 2008, 12:32:41 UTC
hahahah. you posted. AND DANNY IS IN IT. THANKKK YOUUUUUUUU.

err. i sorta skimmed through this cuz i was just soo excited. and so when i make sense, i'll leave you a better comment.
x

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Re: YAY! xmrbrightside89 September 20 2008, 12:43:52 UTC
Hey Hey!
Thanks for reading hehe
I KNOW, DANNY IS INNN! HAHA <3

I'll wait for a huge comment then :D
hehe

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Re: YAY! jennybunny_08 September 21 2008, 04:57:33 UTC
MORE s/x please. i cant stand it when they are fighting. its too much :/ hehehe..

well here is my 'longcomment' or atleast trying to give you a long comment you totally deserve.

waiit. is nando and stewie together? a bit confused whats going on there but they are soo cute giving each other gifts. nando can be cocky sometimes :/

YES PLEASE MOAR DANNY. DANNY = <3 and he so sad in the chapter... make him happyyyyyy. evol person.

OH, and and i cant wait till next ficc :)

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stin8774 September 20 2008, 17:07:43 UTC
Yeah.. New chapter.. So happy now.. You made my day :D
Nando + Stewie = so cute.. Love it

Danny in the hospital?? What happend, I really want to know..

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xmrbrightside89 September 20 2008, 21:33:57 UTC
Hey!
Thanks for reading this <3

I'm glad this made your day... haha ;)
I know they're way to cute together... TOTALLY made for each other, don't you think that too? ;)

Yeah, he got hospitalized... for a collapse... (PAINKILLERS and PILLS)
you'll know what'll happen next soon ;)

THANKS again =)

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fidelitii September 20 2008, 22:40:02 UTC
xmrbrightside89 September 21 2008, 15:03:47 UTC
Hey
Yeah, that part was so heartbreaking ... He misses Xabi so much, but he thinks that that is the best way to let him choose what's best for him.
Yeah, he's so true... and about his decision... well, maybe he'll make the right one but after all those problems...I'd say that... well, hehe DON'T WANNA SPOIL YOU that much...

And don't make Stevie fall for Stewie please!! I want it to be S/X. <-- He already had a kinda crush on Stewie... that *maybe* will grow ... each day... :P

I'M SO EVIL XD

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sportyreds September 22 2008, 02:16:08 UTC
OHMG.
SUCH A LOOOOOOOOOOOONG FIC.
2 parts somemore, i think people wil go crazy after reading, hahahahah!

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xmrbrightside89 September 22 2008, 12:36:54 UTC
HAHAHA LJ told me that it was too LARGE too ahahaha
LJ hates me so much *I GUESS*
Anyway, I think it's not that long ... I mean, it's like a regular chapter from a random book... right? XD
Did you read this or you're still reading the previous ones? =D lool
OMG OMG... I have lots of things to tell you ... when I catch you on msn XD

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sportyreds September 22 2008, 15:19:54 UTC
Lol! So next time when i'm able to enter uni and essay is needed, you help me okay? :P
Hahahaha yeah, you can publish a book with all these stories, i bet it will be selling like hot cakes :DD
Nahh, im still at the previous ones, not that fast, hahah.
I haven been reading since i was feeling rather tired lately. sorry hun :\

O_O
I'm online now (: waiting for you.

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xmrbrightside89 September 22 2008, 15:28:09 UTC
OF COURSE I will help you! ANYTIME ;)
HAHAHA, I don't think so... EVERYONE will avoid my books instead... I already know that u__u
Duuuh! ):

HAHA don't worry then, just take your time, don't need to be hasty loool SOMETIMES being slowly is BETTER haha
You'll taste this better... just like for a SWEET you really like!

OMG, I just realized today that I already wrote like 80'000 words since I wrote the first chapter O____O
It's crazy ahahahha

I'll be online in 20 mins okay? =D

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maag1ty September 22 2008, 07:05:52 UTC
I LOVE YOUUUUU :D
Really, your fic is the most interesting thing i've read the whole summer! :D

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xmrbrightside89 September 22 2008, 12:40:45 UTC
Okay I have two opinions of that
1) you're such a liar
2) you haven't read anything but this
:o which one is the correct answer?
HAHAHA I'm just joking :p
Thanksssss I'm soooooo glad you like my fic that much ahaha
It's for people like you that I keep writing it ;)

Dan's in, see? YAY I'm so excited :D

ps: Your icons is AMAZING **

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maag1ty September 22 2008, 20:59:54 UTC
hahaha thanks :D
and i'm not a liar :P
and the new storyline with dan is so good, really! new dramas haha :D

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xmrbrightside89 September 23 2008, 12:34:18 UTC
Thankssssss <33
YEAH, YOU'RE RIGHT! new dramas in the story HAHAHA =D

<3

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