Comments | xo_swan_ox: Falling Deep

xo_swan_ox

Falling Deep

Nov 15, 2009 10:25

( Chapter Three )

Comments 9

vivheartsrydon November 15 2009, 23:46:44 UTC

Oh i found this story really romantic....And i've never read a marmaid-like story so go you!!I really liked it and i loved how Brendon went from shy to opening up and ending up with Ryan!!! x

xo_swan_ox November 16 2009, 00:31:11 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

thewatersedge00 November 16 2009, 01:35:21 UTC

aw that was so adorable and creative :)

xo_swan_ox November 16 2009, 02:05:52 UTC

Yay! Thank you!

mike_dirnt_love November 16 2009, 09:00:26 UTC

Awww that was so adorable and perfect :D
Minus the big scary storm ._.
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xo_swan_ox November 16 2009, 12:31:07 UTC

Thanks lol I'll try and write less scary things in the future ;)

phoenix_vixen November 17 2009, 04:24:37 UTC

That was perfect! :)

xo_swan_ox November 17 2009, 12:14:26 UTC

wow, perfect, thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it.

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xo_swan_ox November 18 2009, 04:39:40 UTC

I know right, although personally I think bden is sexy at any time and all the time, lol. thanks for reading.