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Jul 05, 2007 22:08

Title: -farewell-
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/ Fernando Torres
Disclaimer: Complete and total fiction. Fernando has a beautiful girlfriend, so I doubt he is gay.
Summary: One last goodbye...
Author's Notes: Unbeta'd... sorry! I love commas. They are my best friend. So there may be comma splices. I also tend to switch tenses a lot (oops) so pointing ( Read more... )

sergio ramos, football, fernando torres

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perfect__denial July 6 2007, 05:03:10 UTC
Beautiful. Going to memories, now.
I was hoping that someone would write a fic about Fernie's move. I'm glad that my wish was heard XDDDDD

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xosagexo July 6 2007, 05:55:08 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah, Fernando's move sort of inspired me to write. It's been a while so I was sort of worried how it would turn out, but I'm glad you took the time to read it!

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haishinlu July 6 2007, 05:06:04 UTC
Oh. Oh that was the thing I was so damn afraid of reading. Ollala anad Sergio? We should start writing about them. *smiles* Oh god this is so heart breaking.

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xosagexo July 6 2007, 05:54:10 UTC
Yeah, after Fernando's move and seeing Olalla at Anfield with him, she really just stuck out in my head. Because she's like a student, so she'll probably stay in Spain till her studies are finished, so I wanted to incorporate some of her and her heartbreak. And you know Sergio finally find's someone who's going through the same thing so he sort of bonds with her. Thank's for reading!

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haishinlu July 6 2007, 07:41:00 UTC
Pictures of Olalla and Fernando at Anfield together? Where?

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aftorres July 6 2007, 05:14:17 UTC
THat was goooooooood..loved it..Really sad actually, but probably true if this was an actual reality..Saved!

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xosagexo July 6 2007, 05:52:22 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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parallelkites July 6 2007, 05:39:33 UTC
Awwe. I was going to write a going-away fic but you've said everything I was going to. It was brilliant. :)

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xosagexo July 6 2007, 05:52:02 UTC
Thank you, and you should write one too! There are different ways you could look at Fernando leaving. I took the sort of...bitter/heartbroken perspective, but you know Sergio could have been understanding and wanted to make the most of their time left? You should write one anyway, because then it gives me something to read =] heehee

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parallelkites July 7 2007, 15:29:36 UTC
Haha, I think I might anyway. I'm bored. XD

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18kgold July 6 2007, 05:57:26 UTC
It's really heartbreaking!

I love how you write an "only thinking" Sergio without a word.

You should keep writing Sernando fics, I'd love them.

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xosagexo July 6 2007, 07:26:51 UTC
Yeah, I though that by having Sergio not say anything it might be more effective *shrug* hope it turned out that way. Thanks for reading!

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