Tip the hat

[xoxmissmoodyxox]

 Oh seekers of spring how could you not find contentment
In a time of riddling reasons in this land of the blind

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Sitting on the steps is what he loved most.

Listening to the birds as they fluttered above.

With his palms on his knees and his cane by his feet.

He would sit on the front steps of the house and

Comments

[sherylo14]

loved it aws rlly aws the stry has a really nice idea~ =p kp it up

>w<

[xoxmissmoodyxox]

Thank you.

:)

Tip the Hat ~ So IN LOVE

[xlovemedeathx]

First of all, I'm IN LOVE with the Title "Tip the Hat" I can picture the story with this title.
Secondly, Have I told you how much I love this type of stories?!
The only thing I want to say is that I imagined the story to be longer than that when you first told me about it... Anyways,It's amazingly written, with the song lyrics in between, it makes it even better!

P.S.
"This was the _____ he wanted to take away" Missing a word or its just me? O.O

Re: Tip the Hat ~ So IN LOVE

[xoxmissmoodyxox]

I'm glad you liked it!

:D

yeah, the lyrics kinda set the mood eh? XD

I love this type of stories too so i decided since i can't find any now i should write my own XD spread the love spread the love XDXDXDXD

thanx again!

[ext_533926]

I luv the story
I liked the addition of the poem in the middle of the story ( the ones i understood anyway )
"Tip the Hat" <3 it bs i dnt think has something to do with the story...
I think "bird-face" or something else would've been more related...
w Keep up the great work
waiting for the next post (^_^)

>w<

[xoxmissmoodyxox]

yeah, Tip the hat was supposed to be another story, but in the middle of typing it i kinda realized how much it sucked and decided to change it. so i started all over again and felt the title was good for it, so yeahhhh~~~

Thanks for taking the time to comment x)

yay!!

[sugar_addicto]

I loved it!! I wasn't expecting the boy to take the man's place. now i'm wondering where the guy has went to...

great job!!!!!! :D mashalla ur ideas are awesome..keep up the good work