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Jul 02, 2011 00:39

Humans are mysterious beings.

they are always in a rush.

too busy wondering about what god gave other creatures.

why can birds fly and we can't?

we made airplanes.

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understading human envy behavior

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:3 sugar_addicto July 1 2011, 21:57:50 UTC
Weird colors by the way!! 3agolat 7ad i don't rmmbr: alwan zganyh :) but totally cool

No, I don't think you're going to kill the human race, you're just seeing how abnormal normal humans are. It's like you opened your eyes today, starting at 6 in the morning when you wrote your previous story.

We're the epitome of unsatisfaction...

P.S: Strangely, I got used to your style. Notice I don't mention captilization and commas and whatever?? Now my inner editor gets turned off when I read your work. Hmm, maybe cuz you still write the same no matter what I say hehe

Keep it, sugar-bun! (dunno if that made sense but it sounds close to something I heard)

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Re: :3 xoxmissmoodyxox July 2 2011, 00:59:52 UTC
ok first of all....the color u mentioned- not so attractive XD

thanks a lot for putting ur inner editor into an induced coma to spare her the suffering through my wonderfully grammar-slaughtered work.

but on my behalf i tried really hard to fix it and this is how it turned out just to avoid ur grammar OCD but oh well. i like this better.

again, srsly that is what u think of these colors?
u call urslf an artist -.-

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Re: :3 sugar_addicto July 3 2011, 17:23:40 UTC
No!! I didn't mean ur writing is a grammatical slaughter! I actually like (as you put it :P) your diction. I just meant format in general.

And don't worry about my blind sense of colors. Hmm, so...white.

Likey :)

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