Delusion.

Jul 05, 2011 20:36

The water parted quietly as boats roamed around.

an air of urgency about them.

He watched silently, listening to his heartbeats quiver.

nothing else he could do.

every few minutes a bright flash of light would illuminate the water around him.

they were looking for him, he solemnly realized.

the rumble of engines seemed distant.

helicopters and search ( Read more... )

drowning untied shoe laces accidents hap

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! sugar_addicto July 6 2011, 21:29:27 UTC
It's so beautiful and heartfelt!!!

The point of it all is how it feels, this falling.

To me, depression is like being in a dark tunnel, without being able to see the little opening of light at the end.

I love, love, love this story. I want to add it to my memories.

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Re: ! >w< xoxmissmoodyxox July 6 2011, 21:38:26 UTC
glad you liked it, i've been waiting for you on msn i though you decided to stay out of it for a couple of days.

i've been online waiting all the time.

i'm on right now o_o

oh well, awesome! finally one of my stories on someone's memo. list.

thanks for the support.

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isomeonecrazy July 7 2011, 18:52:10 UTC
Have you gone through drowning experience!? Cuz you visualized it so clear!
I'm love with this piece!!
Never going to walk without tying my shoe laces o.o

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