Junction Chap. 1

[xoxo_journalist]

Yes, i'm a new writer. I'm beginner so please teach me. I'm sorry for grammar mistakes-.-
My first fanfic and my very first smut. Don't eat me T.T
COMMENTS ARE NEEDED ^-^

Title: Junction
Chapter : 1/ ?
Rating : R
Genre : Smut! (don't eat me :"< )
Pairing : broken!Kyumin (Kyuhyun / Sungmin) , QMi (Kyuhyun / Zhoumi)
Summary : Cho Kyuhyun is at a junction

Comments

[kangaroobb]

LOL
you're so cute..
even made the "card-look-alike-box" out XD

awww...
is the smut too fast??
or is just me who think it is ?? >

[xoxo_journalist]

hahaha, i' the neat kinda person,
that's why i made that box XDD

i think it is fast -___-
thanks for reading ^-^

[chokoyama]

Waooo for my first time reading a LJ fic.. and first suju by the way... I found a very good one... Such a awesome beginning!! *.*
Kyu loosing his PSP.... so sad... poor baby!!
(I'm the kind of girl who speaks everything that came to my mind so my comments would probably not be short... so sorry if it bothers)
I like the way Zhoumi call Kyu "Kui Xian"... it sounds so cute to me!! (I know I'm strange)
Totally in love of that wild Zhoumi!!!
It was a very great smut (we don't use that word in french so i hope i'm not speaking no sense > <')

I apologize for my poor english... I'm a french reader so i may talk a weird language xD

Can't wait for more *jumping happily to the next chap*

[xoxo_journalist]

yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
I LOVE LONGGGGGGGGGGG COMMENTS !
sent me more 8DDD

kyaaaaaaa, i love Zhoumi too :DD
no, u're not strange, tht's what i call cute ^^
whaaaa you love my writing that much ?
OH YEAH I LOVE YOU <333

XDDDDD thanks for reading ^0^

[chokoyama]

Oh I can make comments much longer but since english is not my mother language it's a bit hard (even for jokes)
Yeah I do love your writing, I've tried to came asap to read the next chapters!!
*stop speaking to jump to chapter 3*

[xoxo_journalist]

LOL,
i's okay ^^