a very untitled draft

Jul 24, 2014 04:49

Title: some title that makes sense, hopefully
Pairing: OT12, possible Xiu Min/Lu Han
Rating: PG-13 (might have to get it up to R if I will include some bloody flashbacks)
Genre: Friendship, Sort-of-angst
Length: 1,603w (I'm sorry, I had a busy month. I am attempting at a min.5k, but if the story wants to stretch it's gonna stretch)
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author: gokulex59, character: all, rating: pg13, genre: friendship, group: six

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anonymous July 24 2014, 11:03:39 UTC
turning anon since I feel shy :)

It is exciting, mixing these two au!s made it interesting. The story could grow more too from this. It gave me a sense of shock too, since it the scenes were very passive then Bam! everything unfolded. Also, it does feel little angsty with Minseok turning into some frost god randomly hitting his own brothers.

(I hope this comment made sense tho. Good Job!^^)

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gokulex59 July 30 2014, 13:53:14 UTC
Thank you!

Though I thought I cleared that Minseok is some crystalization god rather than just frost, but apparently I did not. I need to work on my storytelling then.

Thank you for commenting.

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