Let the Pains of Love Linger

[xoxohannah]

I believe that I'm not much of a poet, but I do what I can to express myself in terms of poetry, or at least, my way of poetry (if you choose to criticize my structure). Whatever, poetry is poetry, therefore, this is my attempt:

-------------------------------------------The desire to seek truth

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[nick_el]

pain.
it's all i've been feeling.
i've felt pain since then.
and i feel it still.
but my attempts of taming this anger fails.
this pain tranforms into anger.
which transforms into depression.
which then reverts back to pain.
i'm a creep.
i'm a weirdo.
look at me for who i can be.
not for who i was.
love's running out the door.
it runs, runs, runs, runs!
i wish i could love again.
but it's not for me.
at least.
not right now.
love.life.peace.music.n i c k

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[xoxohannah]

wow nick, i think poetry has got the best of you.
eloquence is beautiful.

<33

lol

[nick_el]

i received the email right when i was writing the second part of the comment. WOWZERS

by the way

[nick_el]

your poetry is supposed to reflect who you are right? yeah. individualism is a rarity nowadays of A&F and Hollister whores. you're last entry hit home with the clones. people who claim to be individual really aren't with trying to express they're individuality through fashion. i'm just another brain-washed human being living in a semi george orwell 1984-"esque" world. i obey orders and that's it. but i still cry freedom when i'm out of that uniform, but still take pride in my beloved Navy. does this make sense? well, it's just a clone's attempt to be different i guess.
-ATAN Nicolo V. Pagaduan, USN

[_loveflowin]

that was beautiful :)

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[anonymous]

Reading your piece has left me feeling inspired.

- eddie.