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Mar 07, 2008 20:53

Title:  I love You
Author: ME~ x33333
Pairing: KangTeuk
Summary: When I love you, and you love me back....
Warning: Semi-detailed smut? It's my first attempt at it, so if you hate it... I don't blame you!! xD Emo-Eeteuk, abused Eeteuk, accidentle-death, raping (or maybe not)  of Eeteuk, e.t.c., and a very moody abuser/rapist!
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psychobarbiehax March 19 2008, 06:32:30 UTC
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!
(i'm sick) I LOVE THESE KINDS OF FICS!!!!

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xoxosuju March 19 2008, 18:12:18 UTC
Aww~feel better *pats on head*

And thankies~~~~~~ <33333

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xoxosuju March 20 2008, 00:53:32 UTC
Yay! I'm amazing!!! xDDDDD

It's my new thing, wired, unseen pairing. I just thought of someone who could've looked really HOT whem he goes phyco, so I chose Kangta, (Siwon was already used alot before, so KangTeuk1!!!!)

xDDDDD

-Gets hug, then BEAR hugs you! <3-

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xoxosuju March 20 2008, 01:05:44 UTC
No worries I wont!!! <333 (maybe I will xDDD)

Kangta is just so much charima and dark skin with gleaming hot eyes, WITH HOT chest hair, (not the digusting one =[), and just his abs, I don't now much about his erm thing, but I just thought of how how and charismatic he looks so XDDDDDDDDDD =PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

And bear hugs are love!!! (Though sometimes painful! xD)

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toma_love March 20 2008, 19:35:12 UTC
for a first time it wasn't half bad. props to you on making a rape your first time as well lol. i liked it (the overall sotry not the raping lol) and can't wait to see mroe of your work. it was wonderful and another little addition to this story line would be great, like to see how it's really going down with supposedly kangin and yesung.

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xoxosuju March 20 2008, 20:51:12 UTC
Hehe!! Thankyou!!!

Well, I've read ALOT of smuts in the past, but I just can't go through the detials!!! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

You read my mind!!! I'm writing a Flashback series of this, two of them has smut? xDDDD I really don't know yet, I'm doing Kangin's POV first. xDDD It's on word. xD

Well, thank you again!!!! =]]]]]]]]]]]]]

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toma_love March 20 2008, 22:10:54 UTC
lol that's the best way to better your smut writing, read other ppl's smut lol. oh like join the new smut community that just opened which is just for like smutty short fanfictions... smutshots. you can check stuff out there once ppl start to put stuff up and then post your own lol... *shameless advertising*

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happy_gogogo March 20 2008, 22:11:53 UTC
This was like whoa (but good, amazing omo whoa lol). Great job on your first try!

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xoxosuju March 21 2008, 03:57:44 UTC
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Thank you~~~ =#]

i'm glad you liked it x]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

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