This story was written over the course of 3 hours at about 2 in the morning, and I must say I rather like it. It's sort of a prequel to my first TBS fic, but can be read alone easily. I think I'm falling in love with Lt. Surge. <3
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pun very much intended
but anywho. as stated previously, i will consistently love anything TBS-related that you write, and if possible i love this one even more than your first <3
your descriptions are simple and yet poignant at all the right moments, and i think your characterization is just about spot on~
my favorite part of this fic, though, being the gen-loving weirdo that i am, is the part about the stories koga's mother told him as a child. "Koga could remember the night of his mother's funeral, sitting on his front porch drinking a bottle of sake waiting for the Gastly with their little lamps to appear and lead his mother's soul to peace." <-- i can't get over how awesome this is, idk why
you & your TBS fics are fabulous! /fangirl
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