A Story By Phil Krueger

[xplay2destroyx]

I have decided to post in this journal a story I wrote for Third Period Theology. The reason I'm posting it is because in my opinion, it is the best piece of writing I have ever put on paper. The assignment was to write a story depicting the destructive nature of Sin. I'd like to thank a boy named Garret Phelps for, although he never gave me

Comments

Phil rock's

[anonymous]

haha phil u rock, that was a great story...yea i don't know what to write. you n ken still need to come over and ken can teach me how to play drum's. lol and don't break our movie date on friday loser! hah
.Sara.x0x

your stroy

[crazzyllama]

that was REALLY good story, i was really interested to keep reading to find out what happened. You should write more storys just for the hell of it.

-brit

Woah

[podgefeb20]

That story was so good it had tears rimming my eyes at the very end, though it was very sad im sure things like that happen in the world today and you did an excellent job of expressing 'sin' and life today. Im sooo blown away and i think you are fabulos! great job, i agree with brit, you should deffinatly write us some more stories! Bravo!
-Lauren-

wow

[anonymous]

hey Phil! wow, that was an awesome story! I really liked it alot!! You should deffinatly write more! Well I wish i could say more in this thang but I gotta go to school, so I guess I*ll see yah first period, hah, later!

oops

[anonymous]

hah sorry, that last comment was - Jenn -
but I forgot to put my name...
so yeah, just so you*re aware :-P