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Lj Idol 01 - Winding up
Nov 05, 2010 00:00
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Jenkins and his love
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solstice_singer
November 6 2010, 03:42:08 UTC
This was spell-binding. At first, I was really sad, picturing him pining for his lost love. Then, as you described the smell in the house, I started to get scared. Needless to say, I found this to be a phenomenal entry.
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xreesex
November 7 2010, 15:23:59 UTC
Thank you so much, your comment really gives me confidence that maybe I'm not as terrible a writer as I think I am, haha.
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xreesex
November 7 2010, 15:24:06 UTC
Thanks!
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the_vernacular
November 6 2010, 05:51:49 UTC
Creepy!
This reminds me of a story I read as a kid about a woman who stole traits from little girls' dolls to make a daughter for herself.
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xreesex
November 7 2010, 15:24:20 UTC
ooh, I'd love to read that story.
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rumplebuttkins
November 6 2010, 12:41:04 UTC
This was very original and very creepy...which means that I liked it. A lot. I loved it. So much. Good job!
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xreesex
November 7 2010, 15:24:33 UTC
And you're not at all biased!
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xreesex
November 7 2010, 15:24:39 UTC
=)
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