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xreesex

Lj Idol Week 5- Afterthought

Dec 02, 2010 23:53

The silence surrounds us, a combination of distance and too much rum. We'd wasted no time hitting the bar, and your clothes still smell like the airplane- stale and worn ( Read more... )

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xreesex December 3 2010, 19:24:52 UTC

Thank you, honey! You're quite excellent yourself!

basric December 3 2010, 22:20:11 UTC

HAH! Your week for the grammar police, fight the ticket all you like they'll never tear it up.

On the other hand though a sad tender story, I enjoyed it very much wrong tense or not.

Very well done.

xreesex December 3 2010, 22:26:47 UTC

Thank you!

team_jessie December 4 2010, 01:38:55 UTC

Wow, what a great "snapshot". So honest and raw!

xreesex December 5 2010, 01:36:31 UTC

Thank you so much!

drjeff December 4 2010, 20:04:10 UTC

Wonderfully well-written. I loved this.

xreesex December 5 2010, 01:36:38 UTC

Thank you!!

edith_jones December 4 2010, 22:01:08 UTC

Wowza! This is a terrific tale. I'm glad to see that it's fiction as it's quite harrowing!
-Allie.

xreesex December 5 2010, 01:37:13 UTC

I'm glad it's just fiction too! Thank you for reading!