LJ Idol, Week Three "Coprolite"

Nov 07, 2011 00:16

“Oh, crap!” was the first thing I heard when I walked into work, followed by the sound of heavy boxes falling ( Read more... )

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sweeny_todd November 7 2011, 05:55:28 UTC
*grin* nice close to this.

the things is... coprolite jewelery can look lovely!! Poor main character!

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xreesex November 7 2011, 05:59:41 UTC
I think it's quite nice myself. We once saw paper made from elephant and panda poo. Same idea, pretty and special but it comes from shit! Funny how that works.

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sweeny_todd November 7 2011, 06:05:08 UTC
It definitely brings you face to face with your cultures short sightedness. In Thailand there was lots of elephant poo paper. It felt soft - like handmade paper - and it was fine.

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rumplebuttkins November 7 2011, 16:48:52 UTC
You said you couldn't write "funny" and I think you've proven yourself wrong. This was witty and very funny. JASON BOBBER!

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xreesex November 7 2011, 19:19:14 UTC
I'm a glad you a think a so.

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xreesex November 7 2011, 17:27:07 UTC
I was trying not to do a "Reese" story haha. Thank you! Conversation is really hard for me.

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noodledays November 7 2011, 20:06:52 UTC
it didn't show, especially in the exchanges between Jim and your protagonist. :)

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baxaphobia November 7 2011, 19:18:45 UTC
haha. Funny story! Smile

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xreesex November 7 2011, 19:19:36 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.

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noodledays November 7 2011, 20:06:01 UTC
awww, I feel a little bad for the narrator. and I quite like both Jim and Carrie.

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xreesex November 7 2011, 20:07:21 UTC
Thanks! I like to think that eventually Carrie dumps the lout and gives the narrator a chance, haha.

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