LJ Idol Week Seven- Bupkis

[xreesex]

You claim to have a hollow, deep inside, that I can’t penetrate. You tell me it’s always been there, that you’ve just accepted it. You’re so fucking beautiful when you cry

Comments

[basric]

loved it.

[karmasoup]

I think I've been in this relationship. So lyrically lovely.

[rumplebuttkins]

I thought this was great, but you already knew that (despite the fact that you say "Noooo, you HAVE to say that"). It's just really poetic, in a sense, and you tell a compelling story without spelling anything out (ultimately leaving a bit for the reader to imagine from their own perspective). I think that's awesome. This was awesome.

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[ellakite]

... and people wonder why love scares me...

Packs a wallop for such a short piece. Thanks for posting.