Lj Idol Week 23 : The Weak Force

[xreesex]

I saw you today at the market, smelling tomatoes and reaching for limes. The woman beside you, brown and alive with the glow radiating from her middle, looked content. A life blooming inside her, a life I was never able to give you. I nearly panicked, hoping your eyes wouldn't make their way over to where I was hiding behind pineapples. It wasn't

Comments

[rumplebuttkins]

I love your short entries because they always seem to pack just as much story and emotion into them as longer ones do. There's so much in this entry that is unsaid that doesn't even need to be explained, and that's awesome.

Also, two entries in a row that end in a positive note? What's up with that?

[misscrankypants]

I love this. I totally know this feeling.

[whipchick]

You capture so many feelings in so few words - well done, well done. So vivid and moving.

[jacq22]

Felt every word here, beautiful, sad and totally honest. Loved this.

[basric]

A loving post, I loved it.