Lj idol Week 25- Cesspool

[xreesex]

Oh, God, this is it. This is it, I'm drowning. It's all over...

"PAULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYY"

I can't even shout up to him, I can hear him, but there's no way he'd hear me with all of this shit rushing past between us. This is all my fault, I shouldn't have traded shifts, I knew I wasn't ready for the night raid, and yet, I wanted

Comments

[notodette]

I totally loled.

[karmasoup]

Well, now THERE's a new one I haven't seen before!

[pixiebelle]

Oh that's a neat POV! Very creative take on the prompt!

[similiesslip]

LOL. Very creative!

I do wonder sometimes what we humans seem like to other creatures but I hadn't thought of a fly's perspective.

Great job! Your entry is the most amusing one I have read yet this week!:)

[myrna_bird]

LOL. A+ for originality!