Lj Idol week 26- Sated

[xreesex]

I lay back on the cheap motel sheet, coarse and spotted, and bring my hands up to my head

Comments

[pixiebelle]

Very interesting POV here and the angle you take it with the prostitute needing them as much they need her. Very interesting to read.

[whipchick]

The form and structure here is really interesting, and I especially like the contrast between what's happening inside and outside the rooms.

Hope this is an OK question - did you know a sex worker or read some background, or is this wholly from your writerly mind? I ask because I did a research study with sex workers, and it's an area of interest for me.

[xreesex]

I did know several, yes =)

[myrna_bird]

All in a day's work for her. I hope the customers are all decent guys. I like the way you told this from her perspective and also the structure appealed to me.

[karmasoup]

Simple and elegant, you did a lot with a little here. I've never done the cheap motel and an elephant dish thing, but I can still relate to that kind of power in many ways. You've captured it well.

[basric]

Very original view from the other side of paid sex. Nicely written, too.