[Fanfic] Crimson Red

Oct 19, 2007 21:58

Title: Crimson Red
Author: xruki_x
Pairing; HayaRyu
Rating: !PG-15!
Genre: FLUFF!!~ Maybe a TINY TINY TINY!! bit of angst
Wordcount: about 2000..
Summary: Hayato and Ryu are going on vacation in a summer palace in China.
A/N This fic is dedicated to: paddyaboard. I promised her this one-shot in June and haha.. *sweatdrops* my computer hates me. Word hates ( Read more... )

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hey yukachan21 October 20 2007, 02:44:26 UTC
awww, this was a cute fic <(^^,)>

"Please use your fantasy on what happends afterwards!"

i liked this line at the end xD
heheheh

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Re: hey xruki_x October 20 2007, 09:28:59 UTC
haha, thanks :)
So you used your fantasy on what happend afterwards i suppose XD

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songkissed October 20 2007, 05:16:29 UTC
So cute and so sweet~! ^^ I loved it. ♥ and...*looks at you in confusion* your english doesn't seem bad at all. Dunno why you say it's gotten worse. ^^

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xruki_x October 20 2007, 09:30:00 UTC
<3
My English was better before.. I stopped with writing fics for..nearly 5 months.. D:..
so i'm pretty unsure about my writings right now..

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songkissed October 20 2007, 22:36:03 UTC
Well, other than a few spelling mistakes, it's fine. ^^ And spelling mistakes aren't really that important -- I know some native English speakers that can barely spell the simplest of words, so yeah! ^^ Your english is good! ^^ Just out of curiosity, if English isn't your first language, then what is? *looks curious*

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xruki_x October 20 2007, 22:47:48 UTC
spelling mistakes are the worst for me ;_;.. *sniff*
Dutch is..I'm a chinese girl born in the netherlands so yeah.. xD;

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