Daddy Don't Go

[xsavethehumans]

Daddy Don't Go

please don't turn on the light
i don't want you to see me tonight
inadequate is what i am
i am a broken man
yet you piece me back together
time and time again
smile at me and say
everything will be ok

oh! if only my tongue
was the pen of a skillful writer
then i could sing the most apologetic words 
you've ever heard
but i know you see past all

Comments

[guitarjane]

i miss you

[xsavethehumans]

aww.
and happy birthday to you nae!
i am sorry i couldn't make your birthday party.
i just couldn't go out, i was close to death.
a little exaggerative but not far from the truth.
happy belated birthday though!!
are you going to be at the kiros show friday night at the west end..?

[krahn]

NEAT!

[4thislove]

With the whole idea of layering...I'm thinking the drums should be the LAST thing to come in....and verry VERRY late on in the song....I'm thinking.

[xsavethehumans]

perharps so. it might get monotonous though. maybe if you'd come in for some structure in the pre-chorus and chorus, then pull out.
but mate - we can do WATEVER the heck we want cause weeeeee're in a band! haha, we'll jam it out for sure on the weekend.
cheerio.

[xindigikax]

You changed the lyrics!!!!
I like how it is now though:
"Spirit verses flesh
I am a walking civil war"