Suicide Lists [3]

[xsilentserenity]

Title: The Suicide Lists [Part 3]
Author: xsilentserenity
Pairing(s): friendship!Eunhae, written in Donghae’s POV
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, Friendship, Drama
Warnings: centers around the idea of suicide, self-harm
Disclaimer: Such a pity.
Summary: When the nothing that is left is too much; when the only option left is to die, to disappear, to have never even existed,

Comments

[i_iz_cobra]

(I've read the other two parts, just thought I'd comment on the most recent post. XD )
My favorite parts of this.. basically when Hyukjae is telling Donghae not to fuck around with his life and the note. But my absolute favorite part is "I'm the star of a vanishing act that won't bring me back." That hit me the hardest and I don't know why, it just did.

Thanks for the update! :D

[tesa11]

You know I always quote my favorite part~~ XD
"..No one can be trusted-I’ve long given up on the power of trust.."<--THIS, I learn this on my own in hard way.....
waiting for next/last part bb ^^

[ilkhjoong]

spotty

[ilkhjoong]

ok i read starting from the beginning :D

Sometimes, my mind is refuge for me, where I can comfort and console my broken soul, and other days, it acts as the worst hell, throwing daggers at the soft spots only I know I have until I’m bleeding my tears out and shattering myself some more.

i love how you constrasted the two states of mind. beautiful ;;

aw, donghae became sad because no one said bye to him. it seems like a petty thing but small acts of recognition really do brighten up your day

why are donghae and his mom so tense? i dont like her;; scary

aww when the bus driver greeted him and actually "noticed his presence.." that part was sweet. he said he didn't care when nobody greeted him but he actually did.

eep hyukjae is such a cutie. i love how you characterize him with his smile.

He laughs and covers his mouth with his hands, but not before I catch a glimpse of his wide smile and gums that showed.adjkhsfjksdhfksjda

[bluelf13]

Sorry for the late comment man ^^; Haha, I'm MIA more often these days now.... T____T

“Don’t fucking do this to me! Don’t fuck around with your life!” <----- This sounds so.... I don't know, it's a great line, like something out of a movie or something xD I thought Hyuk would do something like "NOOOO!!!! DON'T DIE ON ME HAE!!!" but this fierce, angry kinda Hyuk is cool. And I worry for Hae's life at the same time. =_____= Yeesh, Hae, don't scare Hyukkie like that.

[brattygurl2011]

Hae, it's never so bad that you should kill yourself. Even if you think you'll be better dead, there's so much to live for, you just have to be open to finding it or letting it find you.

Thank goodness Hyuk came over and found him. Hyuk loves him and Hae doesn't even see it. Poor Hyuk is so distraught thinking that he could have lost Hae. I hope Hyuk snaps Hae out of his depression and have him finally see the world around him.