You Are My Home (19/?)

Jan 30, 2012 00:09


Title: You Are My Home (19/?)
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter
Author's Note: Again, many apologies for not updating as often as I wanted to do so. Computer troubles are unfortunate. I tried to read through this a few extra times since my keyboard has been acting up but in case I did miss any glaringly obvious typos, ( Read more... )

c: 9th doctor, wc: 1000+, pairing: doctor/rose, doctor who, fanfic: you are my home, c: rose tyler, rating: pg-13

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bloose09 January 30 2012, 17:25:45 UTC
I really enjoyed this chapter. The Doctor and Rose's love for each other is really coming through. The lazy morning love making and their attempts at not trying to display too much public affection were a joy to read about. Their relationship has started off in the best possible way.

This little snippet is a perfect depiction of how comfortable they have become with each other.
He helps her to dress instead. It takes far longer than usual, not because he does not know what he is doing but because they are easily sidetracked. Whatever Rose had expected from her eventual marriage, she had not once considered the possibility of such easy affection.

Good news about the Short's Observatory. The Doctor would never talk down to Rose in this AU. He really loves teaching no matter what the subject. That is just who the Doctor is. I especially liked Rose's realization that her life has changed but the adventure has just begun.

Thank you for posting!

Note: One typo "tamalked" should probably be "talked".

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xsilverxlightx January 31 2012, 04:07:42 UTC
Thank you! I am really enjoying getting to write such a sweet relationship as I generally tend to mostly write more towards the angsty side of things before I started this series.

Yes, I just found out there were actually two observatories in Edinburgh at the time but the other one was not part of a public museum. (I am learning all sorts of random things about the Victorian era that I never expected to learn, it is great.)

The adventure really is just beginning. I am looking forward to writing more chapters about them just having adventures while exploring random places.

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silverlunarstar January 31 2012, 03:43:00 UTC
La-dee-da-dee-da~! My heart is singing from this new update! I love it!

This chapter just shows how much these two love one another. From the morning love-making to him dressing her to teaching her to trying to resist the urge to not cause a scandal. I love reading their interactions with one another because even if they only met a short while ago, they respect one another so much.

Can't wait to read about what other lovely adventures they get into!

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xsilverxlightx January 31 2012, 04:34:09 UTC
Aww, thank you!

I am excited to start writing all of their other adventures. Not all of them will be quite as much fluff as this was. xD

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silverlunarstar January 31 2012, 09:13:20 UTC
Which is totally fine! 'Cause if there wasn't a little mayhem, where would be the fun in that? Makes you enjoy the fluff all the more!

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xsilverxlightx January 31 2012, 17:17:41 UTC
Precisely! If all goes according to plan (which admittedly it rarely does) I will be posting the next chapter which will be a bit less fluff tonight.

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tracy_lousia February 7 2012, 22:44:10 UTC
Lovely chapter, loving the dynamic between them. Looking forward to more.

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