Intoxication

[xsoyquiensoyx]

Juan Ramon and I played a game today where each of us was to write a poem based on any subject thrown out there. I thought intoxication would be a topic that could manifest some very creative writing.

I decided to write two since English is my forte, but Spanish is his primary and sole tongue.  The rhythmis pattern is a bit elementary. I tend to

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[nataliatch]

The bottle in my hand never changed
never empty but into my mouth it rained.
I like that line.

elementary pattern or not, I love it! I could picture these scenes in my head...imagery! hehe

oh and, have you seen this commercial of the spanish soccer team? it's kind of cool d:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-qqSWyKqs8U

[gallopingsnail]

I love this poem. I think searching back into your past has inspired you greatly! :)

<3

[xsoyquiensoyx]

What does this have to do with searching into my past? This was never an experience of mine.

[gallopingsnail]

you were searching through your notes/poems and it re-sparked your writing abilities.