sugar and spice

[xstarlesscity]

krisoo, 4.5k, pg-13
prompt: magical girls au

a/n ahh this is scrappy cause it's a 24h challenge! i will very likely clean this up and expand on this this later... and they haven't even encountered all the members yet, so plenty of room for more plot to come!

cw: child abuse mention

Comments

[cathmorland]

Ah, this is so great ;u; Fem!exo as magical girls makes me so so happy.

I really liked the beginning, how Kyungsoo discovered her powers. Girls having superpowers to protect them from gross men is such a wonderful thing, and I like how the beginning and the threat of a future battle makes things serious and a a bit angsty, while at other times they are just normal girls, with cute and fun moments.

Also the characterization of them all were just perfect, exactly how I'd picture them as teenage girls (with superpowers).

I must admit I was a bit skeptical about the pairing, as I haven't really enjoyed reading fics with Kris in them recently, but it worked really well, and I liked their interactions a lot.

“I think I want to kiss you, but I think maybe right under a cliff is a bad place to do it? In case of rock slides?” was my favorite part haha

[xstarlesscity]

thank you! i'm so glad you liked it.

yeah i was like "is writing kyungsoons discovering her powers to escape harrassment too heavy-handed" but then i was like this is an all-femme fic exchange, who the fuck is gonna object to this

<3<3

[read0write]

aww that was nice and cute :D
glad things worked out well

[xstarlesscity]

i want to continue the verse, or for other people to continue the verse... there's still this ULTIMATE BATTLE thing the have to deal with so NOTHING'S OVER

but thanks!

[lola_tenshi]

Oh, wow, this was amazing. ;-;

I love how you characterized Kyungsoo, with how she discovered her powers as well as how she interacted with the other girls.

Then having Kyungsoo think about how all her friends were boys, because girls made her nervous!! And her interactions with Yifan, and the flirting.

Yifan growing wings!!!! When you described that part, I was feeling exactly what Kyungsoo was feeling. As well as when they were flying . . . and even after the flying. ♥

[xstarlesscity]

oh i'm so glad you were feeling feelings during that last bit, i wrote it in SUCH a rush cause of the exchange's time limits... but the image is so good, haha.

thanks!

[atomicink]

hello~ i just stumbled on this and just *bows down* i love magical girls au and this krisoo is so precious and adorable~ it's such a cute fic;;