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xsugarxrushx

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Oct 26, 2003 19:56

ok so i was in the mood to write...i'm not that great at it but i wrote this little thing that im sure most could relate to aand it goes out to my friend who got dumped by her ex-bf AKA the asshole who she's MUCH cooler than ( Read more... )

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dude_id_tapthat October 26 2003, 20:46:45 UTC

wow that is soo sad, yet so beautiful at same time. you should write more.

xsugarxrushx October 26 2003, 20:48:07 UTC

thanks alex ya i write a lot but i was always skirred of posting them

foreverlani October 27 2003, 10:27:37 UTC

im at home right now... i cant really talk but hey i can still type w00t! dont be skirrrrred sola! u best post ur poems up or else... ::shakes fist:: ♥ ya babe

xsugarxrushx October 27 2003, 17:09:19 UTC

hey gurly i missed u at school today! maybe i will post my stuff up more i ♥ ya too

Damn girl! anonymous October 27 2003, 17:51:54 UTC

You got some mad skills! That was some really good stuff. You should start writing songs for bands. You know what would really kick ass? Is if you could get Finch to play that song. Knowing you, you probably could. Alright, late!

The man. :P

Re: Damn girl! xsugarxrushx October 27 2003, 17:59:42 UTC

omg i'd die to see finch play any of my songs that would be like wow but i dunno we'll can start our kickass band that will totally OWN <3

you are the man

Re: Damn girl! anonymous October 27 2003, 18:03:31 UTC

Yeah, that would kick so much ass! You have to get your rents to let you start those drumb (Oh yeah! The last post was spelled to well ^_^) lessons. Or, I guess you could be the singer.

Dude number 2

Re: Damn girl! xsugarxrushx October 27 2003, 19:14:16 UTC

hahah ya i could be a little dumb drumber chick but NOT a singer helllll no lol

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Wow. o.o anonymous October 27 2003, 19:05:53 UTC

Yeah...wow. That's all I have to say.

~Katie

Re: Wow. o.o xsugarxrushx October 27 2003, 19:13:02 UTC

thanks <333

billa October 27 2003, 19:53:27 UTC

Hey, that's really well written. Sounds like there was actually much thought process going on during the writing, as opposed to some poetry I've read from others. And as I had said before, if you need a critique, just go through and edit bits and pieces of your own choice. It's great. Rock on. :-D

xsugarxrushx October 27 2003, 20:10:23 UTC

hahah thanks ya i do put some thought into the things i write they're all very personall <3

xcherrylipzx October 28 2003, 14:07:51 UTC

wow y havent i signed ur lj in a long time? THAT THING U WROTE KICKS ASS u should totally write songs n then i can dance to them lol. it sucks we have school today when nade outs kuz of the fire.

xsugarxrushx October 30 2003, 19:54:49 UTC

hahah thanks trace like whoa i haven't checked my lj for like 3 days jeezus anyways thanks for ur sweet comment and ya we would never miss school of of the fire b/c our school happens to be cement lol