man i'm tired.

[xthedreamslostx]

     "Water, I guess." Her voice doesn't seem to match her body at all -- deep and serious, a voice expected more of a jaded and aging waitress. But, with a hint of exhaustion that heralds a sweeter disposition on better days. Her face, plain and unspectacular, contorts grotesquely in a sneeze as the attendant walks on to the next row of

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[anonymous]

so far, it sounds like a book i read today in english. we read 4 big pages about this retarded grocery store worker staring at these ugly chicks. and it was 1 page of story and 3 of his descriptions of how ugly the girls were. it wasted a lot of my time.

and you wrote a paragraph describing the scene, and what the girl looked like, before she sneezed? or what

be like 'water, i guess' she looked ugly and shit, then some chick walked by and the chcik by me sneezed 'bless you'
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got details?fucker

[xthedreamslostx]

sweet, my first literary criticism :-P