#44 You're the Perfect Lullaby

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Title: You're the Perfect Lullaby
Prompt: #44
Author: Anonymous
Pairing(s): Seho, referenced fwb! Sekai
Rating: NC-17
Genre (s): slight magical realism in a domestic/restless college boy au
Length: 8.2k words
Summary: His name is Joonmyun, and sometimes-half the time-Sehun is married to him.
Warning(s): marital discord and implied future separation

Comments

[psharp10]

this was done so well i'm !!!!!!!! like the part about the alternate universe/reality was written so so so well and it contrasted and fit in so nicely with the ~actual~ reality i'm in love

and i'm like.. 108% who wrote this so u already know how much i love your writing and this was great!!! I'm just :')) it's so bittersweet and at times hits you hard with the angst but it's just really really lovely and i love your junmyeon and idk why but this part had me ;_____;

He even has his lip mole, and that little crinkle he gets in his nose when he's uncomfortable.

your prose flows so well and baby jongdae is so cute and i'm just dying bc i love domestic fics and you write them so well ;;

[oneforyourfire]

you're always so good to me and it makes me so emotional ;;;;
(is it too soon to say i love you.. i feel it even if it's too soon to saaaaaaay)

thank you for liking my fic and yes ofc they wind up happy
im not #realangst squad
they might have gotten separated in dream world, but in real word, sehun is gonna fight really fucking hard to make them work

[dubudork]

This is amazing. So heartbreaking and so so beautifully portrayed. And I'm so happy and relieved Sehun finally got to meet a Junmyeon of his own. And hopefully eventually, Jongdae. An instant fandom classic!

[oneforyourfire]

ahhhh thank you so much for your lovely comment
im glad you liked my fic
it means a lot to me ;;

[bianca747]

This is so beautiful and painful in the best of ways. It's so well written and I love the descriptions of both Sehun's dream world and the real world. I'm happy it ended on a hopeful note for the real world Sehun. Thank you for writing such a beautiful fic!

[oneforyourfire]

thank you so much reading and enjoying it and letting me know, i really appreciate it

and yes, it does end happy, at least in how i see it
dream world seho were strained because of the baby and suho's new job and so they, at least, as i saw them, broke up
but real world seho have a sehun that is really fucking willing to try and do better and not let this go, so they'll make it

thank you again for reading!!!

[oneforyourfire]

ahhhh thank you for liking my fic ;;

and yeah, poor sehun knowing there's a better life and a better reality for him out there, he lives it but not being able to grasp it because it's real, but not really
it's the day dreamer's angst (i have it too haha), but magic realism means it's kinda real and he gets his love in the end, even if it's different and he has to work for it now
it'll be a happier ending than the other seho in his dream world because sehun will work so hard for it, i choose to believe

thank you again for reading and liking my fic ;;;

[tricia1214]

Far too sad for a Friday morning, I'll have to come back for it. First few paragraphs captured me already❤️

[oneforyourfire]

i hope it wasn't too sad, omg

it has a happy ending, kinda ;;