here is the 2nd draft of my advanced comp paper..let me know what you think :)

[xurhearthope2dy]

On October 11, 2004, I began a journey that I hope will last a lifetime. On this special evening my best friend, Michael Smith, also known as DM, and I finally realized we both wanted to be more than best friends. In the back of our minds we’d always wanted more, and tonight we were going to be brave enough to actually go for it. We wanted a

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[sara_jo]

Sara chimed in and destroyed the moment by playfully saying, “I want to hold your hand too!”

lol...leave it to me! ;)