experimental weirdness, part 3

[xwaltzforvenus]

Title: goddamn, none still.
Rating: Still R, I suppose
A/N: I'm warning everyone right now that I have absolutely no background in action-sequence writing. And I still have like, zero ideas where this is going.

part one
part two

Comments

[marsalka]

why am I not surprised Ryan is the one who actually managed to kill some vamps? :)

[xwaltzforvenus]

Did you really expect it to be Seth?

[melster294]

wow fabulous stuff - definitely competition for the vegas verse!

[xwaltzforvenus]

Thanks!

[60schic]

This cracked me up: Seth was already outside and stealthing toward the building - I can so see Seth *stealthing*

I concur that your action scenes were fine. Seth as the voice of reason though? Also cracks me up. I'm looking forward to see if and how you have Ryan explain everything to the skeptics.

[xwaltzforvenus]

Seth is only the voice of reason because the world has been turned on its ass...

[mirella67]

I kinda love this.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I posted it at first because I was bored, so I was kind of ambivalent toward it. But it's definitly been growing on me.

[brightsidedc]

Just discovered this and am enjoying it very much. =)

[xwaltzforvenus]

Thanks!