experimental weirdness, part 4

[xwaltzforvenus]

Title: alright, I seriously need a title, since apparently I'm going to keep writing this
Rating: Still R?
A/N: Now that this is in my head and I've been obsessing about it (because that's what I do), this was written fairly quickly. I just have, yet again, no idea where it's going from here.

part one
part two
part three

Comments

[fifimom]

This one leaves me a little breathless. Wonderful update, thanks for posting so quickly.

[xwaltzforvenus]

Breathless in a good way, I hope!

Thanks!

[mirella67]

still enjoying it. i like the idea of the two of them (or the four of them?) hunting this guy.

[xwaltzforvenus]

Thanks!

[kazfloyd]

Wow! Really great update. I am enjoying this very much.

[xwaltzforvenus]

Yay! Thanks!

[60schic]

Oh, I like the end of this very much (as if I didn't like the rest?) Ghosts of the dead.

Hmmmm. I'm usually pretty good with titles. That's one right there (above) Or something like 'World Turned Upside Down'..or 'Inside Out'. Hey I'm just throwing it up to the ceiling. If something sticks for you, so much the better.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I'm usually fine at titles, but I never planned on this one actually being written, so I never thought of one. I think maybe the next time I post, I'll just make it the title whatever song I'm listening to at the moment... that could be interesting.

Thanks!

[taylorforever]

Please let Taylor find Summer and convince her. I can see the girls as really fierce red eyed damon hunters. But whatever I will follow your story to the end.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I have the girls' storylines worked out... kind of...

Thanks!