experimental weirdness, part 5

[xwaltzforvenus]

Title: I said last time that I would title it whatever song I was listening to at the time, which happens to be 'An End Has a Start' by Editors

So let's do this again.

Title: An End Has a Start
Rating: Rish?
A/N: this one didn't flow as nicely, and I'm not that happy with the first half, but I only have two more days before I go back to school (ugh),

Comments

[60schic]

Dean & Sam *claps hands* Yays! I definitely like where this is going---wherever that is. And yes, I know YOU don't know either. That can be a good thing. A challenging thing, even.

Anna as a witch isn't a stretch for me.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I decided I'd throw them in, just for kicks.

And I could totally see Anna as a witch.

[marsalka]

ok, it worked... I thought the paragraph was about Summer! But very pleasantly surprised at the introduction of Anna the witch....

[xwaltzforvenus]

That's what I was going for! I'm glad the fake out worked!

Thanks!

[fifimom]

This one is full of surprises but I totally buy into Anna being a "good witch. Thanks.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I really just needed a reason for Seth to go to RI, and Anna as a witch popped into my head.

Didn't seem too far of a stretch...

[beege22]

Great twist, great use of a secondary character.

[xwaltzforvenus]

I will totally take 'twist' over 'convenient plot device'.

It sounds a lot better...

[taylorforever]

Sam and Dean and Seth and Ryan in one spot - this is like being in a candy shop. thanks for that. Anna being a witch is great, it fits her character. But my heart is bleeding about Ryan leaving Taylor. Was that really necessary? And yes, your fake worked. Thanks for the update

[xwaltzforvenus]

Candy is fun! Especially Ryan and Dean shaped candy.

And yes, Ryan leaving Taylor was necessary. I'll try to explain it all... later. I just don't know when. Eventually...