Comments | xwaltzforvenus: experimental weirdness, part 8

xwaltzforvenus

experimental weirdness, part 8

Jan 18, 2009 22:24

Title: An End Has a Start
Rating: R, I suppose
A/N: Um... I am strangely nervous about school, even though I don't have classes again until Tuesday. But I'm like... thinking about it makes me wanna curl up and hide in my closet. And I still need to get my books for this semster, which... yay. So anyway, the point of this was, I'm writing so I don't ( Read more... )

genre: au, fandom: oc, genre: experimental, genre: woe, fic: supernatural

Comments 14

beege22 January 19 2009, 08:22:21 UTC

Well I could see that coming from about a mile away “she came to Georgetown like, a year ago" - I'm assuming we're supposed to work it out with big fat hints like that.

This is great drama, but OUCH! with the angstfest. I'm not sure who I'm more horrified with: Ryan for being such an idiot (especially when Taylor believed him about the vampires), or Taylor for getting involved with such a stupid lame-ass wannabe, because Ryan is so right that she's dating a Seth clone (is Parker meant to be as hopeless as he seems to be to me? And also is his name a deliberate Buffy reference?)

It's a good thing Brandy's writing wild x-men themed crack right now because this story is great, but it makes me want to slit my wrists a little.

xwaltzforvenus January 19 2009, 15:10:01 UTC

Yes, you were supposed to guess. And yes, the minute I wrote Parker, I giggled at the Buffy reference. But Sorry, I didn't mean for the wrist-slitting angst. Although I'm not sure I can promise it'll get better.

kazfloyd January 19 2009, 12:01:07 UTC

Very interesting. So Taylor to have ended up at Georgetown already doing research. I enjoyed the Ryan and Taylor conversation. She is dating Seth's clone. LOL. Looking forward to more.

I hope McGahee was ok too, very scary watching that happen.

xwaltzforvenus January 19 2009, 15:12:05 UTC

He didn't start out as Seth's clone, but it just kind of ended up there. Because honestly, what other person would work in an underground occult library except some guy who really wanted to be a hunter, but couldn't?

Apparently McGahee was moving his arms and legs and talking, so at least he's not paralyzed. Yeah, that was pretty intense, watching it.

brightsidedc January 19 2009, 13:35:10 UTC

Enjoyed this update like the rest. ;-)

Thanks for sharing.

xwaltzforvenus January 19 2009, 15:12:25 UTC

Yay! Thanks!

taylorforever January 19 2009, 14:15:22 UTC

The sentence with the new boyfriend was extremely rude from Ryan. She should have hit him in the face for that.
But I love your story.

xwaltzforvenus January 19 2009, 15:14:01 UTC

Who says she won't in the next chapter?

Thanks!

60schic January 19 2009, 15:30:42 UTC

I love R/T as antagonists here. With a history. And I'm guessing, still with alot of passion brewing under the surface. I'd also be guessing that T is about to help in the research?

xwaltzforvenus January 19 2009, 16:46:01 UTC

She may have some things to offer. I mean, it's not like she hasn't been obsessive researching for a year and a half.

Thanks!