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xwaltzforvenus

experimental weirdness, part 10

Jan 23, 2009 16:23

Title: An End Has a Start
Rating: R, definitly this chapter
A/N: so... I was watching 'The Office' for half of this, so I wasn't really paying attention to what I wrote. I hope it's ok.
A/N 2: seriously, I didn't intend or expect this to go on so long, and I hope it doesn't feel like it's dragging or anything.
A/N 3: for previous parts, follow the tags

( part ten )

genre: au, fandom: oc, genre: experimental, genre: woe, fic: supernatural

Comments 18

brandywine421 January 23 2009, 22:22:34 UTC

Still totally loving this. Even if I am a flake at commenting these days.

xwaltzforvenus January 24 2009, 02:56:55 UTC

Yays! It's ok, I flake sometimes, too.

Ok, a lot.

kazfloyd January 23 2009, 22:54:03 UTC

OMG! Loving it....I can't beleive you are leaving it like that. Can't wait for more. Still loving clueless Parker too.

xwaltzforvenus January 24 2009, 02:57:19 UTC

Of course I'm leaving it like that. Dramatic cliffhangers are the best!

beege22 January 24 2009, 00:10:22 UTC

This story definitely doesn't feel like it's dragging - more like you're conducting an experiment in how much depressing stuff can be crammed into one fic. Good plot development and dialogue, and props to Seth for standing up to Summer. That conversation was well done because she's right, they're both in the wrong, but I'm still glad to see that Seth didn't let her away him from what he feels he needs to do ( ... )

xwaltzforvenus January 24 2009, 02:59:22 UTC

It would've been weird for Seth and Summer to just jump back together. And I was planning on going further into Taylor and Parker's relationship, but then the vampire thing happened and I got distracted.

And from the beginning, this story has been more about their relationships than it has the monsters. Or, at least that's what I was aiming for.

beege22 January 24 2009, 03:28:24 UTC

>It would've been weird for Seth and Summer to just jump back together. And I was planning on going further into Taylor and Parker's relationship, but then the vampire thing happened and I got distracted.

So long as you get there eventually (because there's so much room for interesting fallout :)

>And from the beginning, this story has been more about their relationships than it has the monsters. Or, at least that's what I was aiming for.

Then you hit what you wee aiming for. Actually, it's always been clear that the relationships are the focus of the story, I was just trying to say that using the supernatural setting as a vehicle for that was clever.

marsalka January 24 2009, 01:26:57 UTC

wow, talk about a narrative turn! and now you have me wondering about Parker's "humanity".

xwaltzforvenus January 24 2009, 02:57:37 UTC

Hmmm... you'll have to see about Parker...

60schic January 24 2009, 05:06:48 UTC

Jesus...this just went from scary to OMG WTF!!!

And Parker...um...this isn't gonna end well.

xwaltzforvenus January 24 2009, 05:47:44 UTC

Hee... omg wtf in a good way, I hope!

And no, I highly doubt it will end well. For Parker, at least...

60schic January 24 2009, 17:18:41 UTC

Definitely in a good way.