Comments | xwaltzforvenus: fic: LSF

xwaltzforvenus

fic: LSF

Feb 09, 2009 14:11

Title: LSF ( Read more... )

genre: au, pairing: ryan/taylor, fic: lsf, fandom: oc, genre: experimental

Comments 13

60schic February 9 2009, 19:58:57 UTC

Oooo - T screening TT. This should be good.

xwaltzforvenus February 9 2009, 20:20:10 UTC

Hee. I'm not sure if I'm going to actually show it, because it's all from Ryan's POV, but who knows?

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xwaltzforvenus February 9 2009, 21:28:08 UTC

Oh, no no no. Winchester is Che, remember? Summer dates him in the no-Ryan universe.

I do like this CV.2. Maybe cause I love Chino!Ryan.

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xwaltzforvenus February 10 2009, 00:14:38 UTC

Hee!

But I totally flashed to the Winchesters when I wrote it and it's only natural to hear 'Winchester' and think 'omfg, hotness' instead of 'omfg, weirdo'. Natural mistake.

beege22 February 9 2009, 23:29:49 UTC

I'm pretty sure that Taylor and Theresa have never met in fic, so really you have a moral obligation to fandom to show that meeting (if you struggle, I recommend you read chapter 8 of Sister Rose's excellent 'Seasons Change' over at ff.net in which Theresa quizzes Summer over her intentions).

This fic is just plain enjoyable - I especially like the myriad of slick little details you incorporate (like Taylor thinking that Ryan was the older brother and her comment 'we've been working on her' which gives away a lot about Taylor's life in a Ryan-free Newport).

Of course, Taylor and Ryan just being themselves is always a good deal, when their characterisation is this well done.

xwaltzforvenus February 9 2009, 23:35:13 UTC

But see, I have major OCD and I can't just *change* the POV. So either Ryan has to sit in on the conversation, or I have to go against my nature, which I'm not sure I can do. It'll haunt me.

We'll see what I come up with.

beege22 February 10 2009, 05:56:54 UTC

Actually, I think that conversation would be even funnier if Ryan were there - oooh, what if Taylor and Theresa *think* they're having a private conversation but Ryan accidentally overhears everything?

That would be just about right for the tone of this fic, I think, given that you're apparently writing a classic screwball romantic comedy.

marsalka February 9 2009, 23:55:42 UTC

oh no! Theresa is headed for Taylor! hee. though Ryan apparently needs the help ;)

xwaltzforvenus February 10 2009, 00:03:54 UTC

Hmm... we'll have to see if she actually helps or not...

fifimom February 10 2009, 02:26:17 UTC

So lovin this, thanks for the update.

xwaltzforvenus February 10 2009, 02:36:24 UTC

Yay! Thanks!