Comments | xwaltzforvenus: OCSFC

xwaltzforvenus

OCSFC

Jul 06, 2009 12:20

Title: Circular Motion Takes It Straight to the Point
Rating: R
For: finlee
Sentence: Marissa finds Ryan's journal and she's not too happy about what she reads
A/N: I am so sorry. This started out fine and it just... I'm sorry. It's rated for darkness.

( when we get to the end, can we do it all again? )

genre: oneshot, genre: au, fandom: oc, genre: woe, fic: ocsfc, pairing: ryan/marissa

Comments 27

finlee July 6 2009, 20:03:23 UTC

Wow! You killed Ryan! Awesome story! I always thought Marissa was a bitch but she killed Ryan...with a poker...in the living room.

I really enjoyed this, thanks!

xwaltzforvenus July 6 2009, 20:20:56 UTC

You make it sound like a game of Clue... Marissa, in the living room, with the fire poker.

Thanks for the lovely prompt!

finlee July 7 2009, 21:02:56 UTC

Just reading the comments I learned that you hate Marissa too! Whew! I was worried that someone would turn the prompt into something that would make Marissa the victim...once again!

xwaltzforvenus July 7 2009, 21:18:22 UTC

Like Marissa? God no. I would rather have Ryan with anyone else on the planet.

Thread 5

famous99 July 7 2009, 00:15:13 UTC

That is evil! Marissa is evil. But great story.

xwaltzforvenus July 7 2009, 00:24:17 UTC

Thanks!

rose_in_texas July 7 2009, 02:39:53 UTC

Wow, that didn't go where I thought it was going! I thought Marissa would kill herself -- what with the drinking and thinking -- and then she kills Ryan!

xwaltzforvenus July 7 2009, 03:04:30 UTC

Sorry for the mislead! The other way would've definitly been better...

Thanks for reading!

oc_gambit2 July 7 2009, 19:12:06 UTC

Much as I'd like seeing Marissa dead....the 'mislead' is what made this such a good read, for 'moi'.

r_mak July 7 2009, 06:00:43 UTC

Wow!

I was iffy about reading it but you wrote it so I thought I'd give it a shot and I now have a favorite RM fic of all time (even though I haven't read a heck of a lot). I was afraid you'd do something along the lines of her being a drama bitch, fighting with Ryan, and then make them make up but you didn't.

It's weird how Ryan's been a cage fighter and everything and all it takes is a blow to the head with a fire poker by drunken stick girl to take him out.

Is it wrong that this fic made me laugh and put a smile on my face?

I loved this. Such an awesome bedtime story.

*hugs*

xwaltzforvenus July 7 2009, 13:57:32 UTC

Glad you liked!

taylorforever July 8 2009, 05:20:22 UTC

That`s exactly what life with that girl would have been for Ryan. You are good. Killing him with the poker, I think that`s funny.

xwaltzforvenus July 8 2009, 11:07:59 UTC

Hmm... I wasn't exactly going for funny, but I can see where you're coming from.

Thanks for reading!