Fallen Flower 1
Title: Fallen Flower
multiple chapters fiction
Pairing: haehyuk
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, AU
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Mean!Hae, Abused!Hyuk, RAPE!
Beta-ed by hyukhae4ever and tees2mai Thank you so much!!!<3333
*English is not my first language but I had try my best
*Base in Japan around 1940s so please go to list of word at the end if you found something you don't know ( Read more... )
multiple chapters fiction
Pairing: haehyuk
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, AU
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Mean!Hae, Abused!Hyuk, RAPE!
Beta-ed by hyukhae4ever and tees2mai Thank you so much!!!<3333
*English is not my first language but I had try my best
*Base in Japan around 1940s so please go to list of word at the end if you found something you don't know ( Read more... )
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im DYING to see what happns when hyukkie wakes up XDD
im goin to pretend i know nothin abt the story <3
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Now I almost finished the chap2 but still need to fix a lot XDDD;
Thank you so much!!
*hug you tight*
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Thank you so much Dear<333
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I'm really excited...
ahhh... no one can resist Hyukkie's charm...
but poor him... *pouts*
Hae, must you be that rude to him... you enjoy abusing Hyukkie aren't you? ahahahaha...
wonder what'll happen when they woke up in the morning? *wink*
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I'm so excite too since I haven't write multi-chap for such a long time<333
but yeah.. I know I'm so mean to Hyukkie this time LOLZ XD
Hae is kind of rude and well.... bad guy here XDDDDD
I'll try to update that as soon as possible ;DDDD
Thank you so much!!<3333
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*hug you back*
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I think we're getting more & more pervert cos no one can resist extra cute innocent and FUCKABLE of course little Hyukie LOL If i had enough money like Hae i'd definitely buy him XDDDD but i can T___T I wont abuse him but i'll make him scared & tired by ... staring at him all night HAHAHA :) Such a good girl I am, right? LOL
Donghae-sama ROFL I swear when i first saw this weird word i also chocked with laughter cos it sounds freaking ... weird LMAO In my mind Hae is always Hae-chan
The rape scene is fucking HOT xDDD Hyukjae is the most beautiful flower i've ever seen in my life :D
Imagine Hae-chan in hakama, so cute ~~~~ Hyukie in yukata will make me scream & faint xD Hyukie in women's kimono will kill me 8DDD
"Fallen flower", does is mean Hyukjae will ...? O_O Dont kill him plz :( Give us more rape HOT scenes xD
Update soon Dear :) *can i call you Mad Rabbit?*
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Yes We are!!! I don't know why too XDDDD
but well I guess it's Hyuk's fault again XDD
YES YOU ARE~!!!Don't forget to send me his naked picture OK?
LOLLL
XDDDDDDDDDD LOLLLLL OH MY XDD That's true too since I always call him Dong-chan myself XD
Ahahah I'm so glad you found it's hot ;D
and Yeah! I would love to see it too!!! 8D
Oh Killed!? Hummm well my fic didn't seems to have any thing exciting like that so don't worry he won't die XDDD
I promise I'll update soon
and LOL Yes you can I must say I love that name XDD
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how Hae did hyukkie this time *Q* *flails*
god i would love to be inside of your brain for a day,, this is so hot and sexy
and i really cant wait for the next chap<333
*squeals* you. your writings make me addicted to abused!hyuk xD
and no im totally not complainingxDDDD
*hugsss**
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If Siwon is Shisus then I'm god of pervert *wave around*
Inside my brain for a day!? LMAO!!!!!!!!
Well, all my brain is All NC-17 and there's a secret door that lead to NC-21 area too XDDD
You can open that door to take your own risk Baby XD
I promise I'll update soon and YEAH!!! Abused Hyuk is GOOD!!
Who can denied it!? XDDD
*hug backkk*
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your writing has improved a lot and this time your story is super sexy!
Hae is this rich- extra cool- bad boy (I can sooo imagine that) and Hyukkie is the poor waitress paying for his family debt. He must be super cute since DongHae quickly jumps and throws a bag of money for him! (i wish i can do that, it seems super cool! haha but maybe i'll have to do that with monopoly money because I won't have a bag of money to throw out)
the smut is WAAAAY COOL! Hyukkie is such a virgin slut, it's like ... straight from a porn movie!
I'm already waiting and anticipating for 2nd chapter now. look what you've done!
okay ... i better go and finish my own story ...
wish me luck!!
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OMG OMG you just make me so happy!!!and also thanks to Tee and HaeHyuk4ever who beta-ed for me too XD
YES!! Bad-boy Hae and Bad-luck Hyukkie!! XDDDDD
That's my dream to thrown money at him and buy him too LOL maybe we can make bag of money by putting all cheap coins there you know? XD
Aren't we so sadistic here!? XD
LOLLLZZZZZ PORN!!! LOLLLLLL XDDDDD
I promise I'll try to update it as soon as possible<3
and wish you good luck on your fic Baby!! ;D
*hug tight*
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