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[xx_disaster]

A new poem.

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[lostvision]

Well-written, well-expressed. Sounds remarkably like how I felt while I was in school, especially the last stanza, and especially especially the last two lines.

But believe me, it's not.

You'll get there, and it'll be like a whole other lifetime. I doubt it helps much to hear this, because I remember that plenty of people gave me words of encouragement and consolation, and I still felt like a caged tiger--pacing, waiting, pacing, just longing for freedom, and sometimes unable to breathe for lack of it. Just hang in there, no matter how long every day between your current life and your future might seem.

[depthsofdavid]

i like your word choices in your poem.

i totally and COMPLETELY relate with your orange chicken predicament. nothing at all can make me hungry on the spot like Orange Chicken. im freaken starving for it now!

[xx_disaster]

Yeah.. Orange Chicken rocks!! <33 yummers.

<22

[xx_disaster]

Haha.. I put 2's. What a dork.

[trapt_007]

i really like your poem... it flowed really well. but i luv breakfast food too... 'specially toast... *yea toast...lol*. i'm glad you had a good day :) and i hope you have more of them.
♥beth

[xx_disaster]

*Yeah toast* Haha.. inside joke. Kinda.

♥

[trapt_007]

yea... i would consider it somewhat of an inside joke...lol!
♥beth

[kill__the_noise]

i really liked your poem, it was well written.

and,
breakfast food is better than anything.