I like it! It has a definite feeling of CRAZY and CONFUSED. Maybe with a little more elbow grease in the beginning because some people might not know what the hell you're talking about. At the same time it gives the story the disjointed feeling of Cloud's mind. I would like to see the interaction between Tifa and Cloud last a little longer, but the piece is under 700 words. :D YOUR LAYOUT HURTS MY EYES.
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