glad you think so cause i am. you have no idea how uncomfortable i am writing this story even though i like it. writing sex makes me un comfy *looks down at feet*
yes on a coffee table...blame it on my friends making out on it. haha pool tabe? that sounds hot...i might work that in there hehe.
hehe i didnt cheat i swear! hehe i cant tell you if youre right or not.
I like it a lot, it was definately sexy, but funny as well. I love the fragmented style and the tone of the narration. Please write more of it. And because it's me, I can only say JESSE+ADAM, because they are perfect together.
why thank you! i'm already working on chapter 3 chapter 2 is already written and should be up soon. hehe they are perfect together arent they. but i have to play the bad guy and not say if it is or not. xxx
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On a coffee table? It's so low to the ground! Ahhh. How about pool table? Now that would be effective...and hot. hehehe.
Okaaaay, it's Frankie and somebody else. I don't know who the other person is. You didn't do like...physical descriptions. NOT FAIR. Cheater cheater.
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yes on a coffee table...blame it on my friends making out on it. haha pool tabe? that sounds hot...i might work that in there hehe.
hehe i didnt cheat i swear! hehe i cant tell you if youre right or not.
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I love the fragmented style and the tone of the narration. Please write more of it. And because it's me, I can only say JESSE+ADAM, because they are perfect together.
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i'm already working on chapter 3 chapter 2 is already written and should be up soon.
hehe they are perfect together arent they. but i have to play the bad guy and not say if it is or not.
xxx
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P.S. The sex went well. So no worries there ♥
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This is Elise, starsandshiners. Add me on this one, please.
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